Poetic Junkie

I like this it's awesome good job u phene lol jk ;)

thank you your comment put a smile on my face..very much appreciated..peace Crim :)

This poem if filled with great lines

I know exactly how you feel when I really like something I get completly obsesive

I have been cracked out on poetry for like a month, I am waiting for DUP to ambush me in an intervention and take my pen away

thank you for your lovley comments..you made me laugh by saying you're waiting for DUP to ambush you and take away your pen.. :) peace Crim

completely amazing and it packs some punch too. impressive.

thank you..for the beautiful comment..peace Crim :)

Shouldn't this poem be in the erotic section? I really like this. You take the love of poetry and turn it into a sex and cocaine rock band orgy. A piece which shimmers with passion and a love for the art that few can rival. "Filling my mind taking me up and down with their meaning". That line was surprisingly subtle. Or I'm a wee bit slow. Probably the latter haha. But the double meaning of "taking me up and down" was divine.
My only quibbles are to do with grammar:

1. L10: "Only the mind of poet can visit" - "a poet"
2. L: "A whore for erotica in it's most naked form" - "its"; when you're using it in the possessive context, there must be an apostrophe before the "t" and the "s". You only use "it's" when it's an abbreviation of "it is".

Sorry to be a grammar Nazi but this stuff will matter if you're ever put in print. Which I think you should be one day.

Jack I love your honest comments thank you for pointing out my errors..I drop words often and for pointing out the its I thought when spelled it's it was possesive I googled it and found out I was wrong..I don't think I will ever try to publish but thank you for the beautiful comments..you inspire me to keep working this art form..peace Crim :)

Love the angry emotion of your response..peace Crim

A poem about the beauty of a poem that is beautiful in itself!!!

thank you..you're are too kind..thank you for the beautiful comment..peace Crim :)

One of the best poems I've read in some time. It reminds me of Buk(owski)in how completely without frills it is, how it reaches and delves (just like the fingers it discusses) for the core of the issue, the truth of it. I've often seen poetry referred to as a drug but it's always been just a metaphor or a device. This poem KNOWS about drugs. And it knows about poetry. For some reason I can't see or find how to get it onto my reading list. But I'll get there. Fucking AWESOME write.    redTbird

I take that as a great compliment coming from you a writer i've come to respect ty..ty as well to the add to your reading list..peace Crim

with the comments above, i just love this poem, this unique fusion of lust for words and getting your fix through them.
Great job :)

ty for such a beautiful comment making me smile..peace Crim :)

One powerful read.

A drug in itself.

A cure.

A sonata.

A slap on the face.

ty i'm glad you enjoyed it..peace to you Crim :)

lol love for poetry baby..........im in :)

thank you :) peace Crim

thank you Mr. A for making me smile :) much love Crim

An addict for the poets
who speak in deep metaphors
your metaphor
would better rhyme
with whore