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Adagio...
a single lumiere
cast it's glow upon the night
center stage, I lay my hands upon thee
copulations to Adagio ,
a slow movement
in our moment of love........
...I hear a symphony
I press my fingers against your flesh
softly, we begin
does your skin feel
my gentle piano wind?
A long and winding melody
sings the soul of
an enraptured man
tenderly making love
to his muse,
the likes of no other
shall ever be...
Slow, sweeping arabesque
turning, spinning with finesse,
an elegant danse
hoping to stimulate
each and every perfectly placed
note composing our romance......
…..in common time
vivid, rich and brilliant
passionate shades paint an erotic gavotte
his baton undulates in strict rhythm,
dynamic contrast setting the tonality
of a sublime musical, poetic love
we make with our minds
….as this lilting melody plays
in a very familiar shade,
floating in air like sightless birds....
….ascending, descending blissfully
building slowly, approaching
the apex of their climatic flight
releasing unto the heavens their
mortal souls.......
….relinquishing all control....falling, fading
a la breve,
freely rubato,
winding slowly
broad rallentando,
fine........
….hearts applaud the night
a segue into the silence
of love's sensual 2nd movement
Adagio
Published 4th Jun 2014
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4th Jun 2014 10:42pm
Rallentando, rubato and gavotte -- there is no doubt that you have an outstanding vocabulary and poetic mastery.
There is also no denying that I am quite a bit in awe of you, and your poetry always hits the right notes with me..... This poem is no different and I especially love the fact that you weave your words here like the skilled wordsmith that you are -- I am enchanted and mesmerized with both the poem and your talent and the pic is fitting and very nice to look at ;) ♡♡♡
There is also no denying that I am quite a bit in awe of you, and your poetry always hits the right notes with me..... This poem is no different and I especially love the fact that you weave your words here like the skilled wordsmith that you are -- I am enchanted and mesmerized with both the poem and your talent and the pic is fitting and very nice to look at ;) ♡♡♡
5th Jun 2014 1:13am
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4th Jun 2014 11:25pm
Bravo! Bravo! Encore! Encore!
Thank you Windy-T
.....and now for the climax, *the rondo* (wet "clean up" on row 5) :0
.....and now for the climax, *the rondo* (wet "clean up" on row 5) :0
5th Jun 2014 6:57am
The imagery of a romantic bed&breakfast nook, in Italy overlooking lake Como, with open windows and sheer scarf curtains blowing in the wind, while Mozart softly plays in the background, came to mind while reading this. This piece showcased your knowledge and love for music, as well as your sheer brilliancy when it comes to composing incredible literary art. I love your mind! Gorgeous! Xoxo
5th Jun 2014 4:52pm
"..The imagery of a romantic bed & breakfast nook, in Italy overlooking lake Como, with open windows and sheer scarf curtains blowing in the wind, while Mozart softly plays in the background, came to mind while reading this......" <----an absolutely splendid caption; an even better romantic getaway (making a note of that)
Thank you beautiful Mistress Rain. You are most complimentary : ) (flattery will indeed get you into trouble of the best kind)
Thank you beautiful Mistress Rain. You are most complimentary : ) (flattery will indeed get you into trouble of the best kind)
6th Jun 2014 6:14am
I always love the musical element in your poems! I swear i could hear classical music with most of your writes! You have this airy ease of sexuality in your words composed with imagery of the most beautiful..it almost plays like memories in my mind. I don't know if that makes sense, trying to explain what romance you portray. Imma stop while I'm ahead haha, Divine read of your poetic flows!!=)
6th Jun 2014 6:19am
8th Jun 2014 2:36am
I can't help but think of the ways discovering a beautiful tune are similar to the discoveries of erotic love. I have to put this next to "Ribbon In The Sky"...
9th Jun 2014 1:24am
"...I can't help but think of the ways discovering a beautiful tune are similar to the discoveries of erotic love. "<----- exactly : )
8th Jun 2014 6:05pm
such sensual heat!!!Beautiful Artistry Mr. M
fav lines:
"ascending, descending blissfully
building slowly, approaching
the apex of their climatic flight
releasing unto the heavens their
mortal souls"
ahhhh absolutely Breathtaking!!!
fav lines:
"ascending, descending blissfully
building slowly, approaching
the apex of their climatic flight
releasing unto the heavens their
mortal souls"
ahhhh absolutely Breathtaking!!!
a perfect, complete, holistic love is just like a beautiful symphony. that's what I was trying to capture in this ink : )
Thanks for reading me Jasmyn : )
Thanks for reading me Jasmyn : )
16th Sep 2016 1:26pm
Such an enchanting piece!
Ahhh, to make love in Adagio...
ascending, descending blissfully
building slowly, approaching
the apex of their climatic flight > this just rolls of the tongue... delicious lines!
If you hadn't put commas in it, I would have read: (did it anyway btw)
ascending descending, blissfully
building, slowly approaching,
the apex of their climatic flight > why do I mention this? No idea ;-)
No idea either whether you like it or not, but I love this one (it's got my name in it as well ;-))
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uuwn4srgvzE
Ahhh, to make love in Adagio...
ascending, descending blissfully
building slowly, approaching
the apex of their climatic flight > this just rolls of the tongue... delicious lines!
If you hadn't put commas in it, I would have read: (did it anyway btw)
ascending descending, blissfully
building, slowly approaching,
the apex of their climatic flight > why do I mention this? No idea ;-)
No idea either whether you like it or not, but I love this one (it's got my name in it as well ;-))
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uuwn4srgvzE
