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Peace
In the 60's they thought
They had the remedy
For peace.
With free love, free stores
If you didn't have something
The Diggers would say "Brother I do".
Now a days, peace is more elusive
With what goes out on the waves
With it's dark media vision.
Fusing in my brain
Causing me to question
Clouding my decisions.
Peace
How would you know
You reached this destination?
Unless you first crossed over
The chaos that is
This world's devistation.
I believe peace
Is a journey
One made for our learning.
I've had to travel
Many dark tunnels
To walk into the light.
Peace
There she is
I have her in my sight.
They had the remedy
For peace.
With free love, free stores
If you didn't have something
The Diggers would say "Brother I do".
Now a days, peace is more elusive
With what goes out on the waves
With it's dark media vision.
Fusing in my brain
Causing me to question
Clouding my decisions.
Peace
How would you know
You reached this destination?
Unless you first crossed over
The chaos that is
This world's devistation.
I believe peace
Is a journey
One made for our learning.
I've had to travel
Many dark tunnels
To walk into the light.
Peace
There she is
I have her in my sight.
Published 25th Mar 2011
| Edited 1st May 2016
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25th Mar 2011 1:47am
Wow, I really really like this. People cant spread peace unless they find it in themselves and when you find it youll know it!Dont promote what you dont understand. I like it!
25th Mar 2011 1:52am
thank you..I struggle with bi-polar and peace is at times elusive for me but I believe in it with all my heart..my faith just waivers at times..in what is me and what is my mania..thank you for the appreciation..peace Crimsin
25th Mar 2011 1:54am
I am too. Somtimes I am very peaceful and then Im very dark...Its a weird thing and very hard to explain. But I think it makes me who I am. So I except it i guess.
25th Mar 2011 1:56am
yes i'm dark and light at times as well..I've written many light poems and I mean them but i've written poems so dark i've had to burn them..thank you for relating and understanding..peace Crimsin
Anonymous
25th Mar 2011 3:58am
Great poem! :]
This is a great song to go along with it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yNKhIJfB510
This is a great song to go along with it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yNKhIJfB510
25th Mar 2011 4:24am
Thank you Cori for the comment and the song..Imagine is one of my all time favorite songs..I loved the video that went with it..thank you peace Crim :)
25th Mar 2011 6:27am
This is a beautiful poem and so true because peace has become so rare to maintain these days. Good job. (:
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1st May 2016 9:35pm
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1st May 2016 9:55pm
thank you Gabriel for digging through my closet and finding this for me..
brings back good thoughts and times :)
love Crim
brings back good thoughts and times :)
love Crim
