End of Days

i love this thats right all humans will die !! :)

:D

well we brought it upon ourselves is only a matter of time

Bingo....;)

Hello again AlienScum. I can imagine a group like Iron Maiden tackling this one! Great words, great art (could even be the cover of the single)  
 

Hey thank you so much friend ! I'm outta inspiration, so if you ever feel like it, write a chorus for this and let's give it to ole Bruce and his gang to sing it, wouldn't this be awesome lol

I'll try.

How 'bout

pyre ablaze
demons raze
world in flames
end of dayyyyyyyyyyyyys !!!!

Like this

thank you :)

great imagery

Thank you :)

This gave me chill bumps! It's a wonderfully written masterpiece, and I love the simplicity of it because even simple poems contain numerous mental images while reading each word. I also like the reference of "The lord of the flies." :)

You honor me so much by calling this a masterpiece..i wish i could write better...but what's important is to enjoy whatever we do and create. Thank you so much :)

Beautifully dark..

The nobles during the French revolution would call the populus dark...same thing happens now...but maybe soon les miserables will inherit the Earth...and it will be beautiful :)