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YOUR EYES DANCE
I can hardly take my eyes off sexy you, being so beautiful and slightly older. I adore how your eyes dance during intimate sweet conversation. I sip Red Label Scotch while you step off to get comfortable. Listening too "Don't Say Goodnight" by the Isley Brothers feeling relaxed, you came out in your birthday suit, sexy pumps and a giddy grin. Snuggling close you hit the joint, softly running a hand along my thigh. As pipe swells you coo sweetly watching me grow. A few mushroom too ball strokes, I stood crowbar stiff. Kissing the head moaning, your tongue swirls and dabs the slit. Mouth was hot taking just over half before the gag. Wet tongue ran laps along and under my bone. Tagging up, I tease breasts pinching nipples of stone. Easing south I'm mesmerized by your shaved, with a pebble hard clit throbbing. You moan as tongue slithers between temple doors, accepting me readily. Hot juices sweetangy and flowing. Holding my head you guide my mouth too all your right places, while wanting hips worked back and forth. Cumming loud and body shuddering, the heat and taste of your sauce overwhelmed rational thought. Taking our passions up stairs, we start over with seventy-five take away six. I kiss and tongue every inch of honeypot, as you buck and squirm atop of me. Using mouth like no other woman I know, You frantically gave me major brain. Tongue spanking your clit orgasm three came hard smearing nectar over face. Passionate kisses let you taste yourself. Tight as a drum, it took a couple attempts too get inside, but fit like a glove. Slow pistons up and down, your sexy sheath coated the firm with honey as sexy mams bounced freely. Humping back flexing my pipe deep inside, flipped your switch as orgasm four consumed us both. And being so beautiful I adore how your eyes danced, rolling back. I could hardly take my eyes off of sexy you.
Sir Lancelott
Sir Lancelott
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Re: YOUR EYES DANCE
21st May 2014 11:07pm
You are so adorable, sweet Lance.
Hot write, sound like just an excerpt of a steamy night.
Stay pretty ;)
Hot write, sound like just an excerpt of a steamy night.
Stay pretty ;)
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24th May 2014 9:11pm
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21st May 2014 11:40pm
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24th May 2014 9:12pm
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22nd May 2014 00:17am
As you know I love and adore your erotic poetry and this one flowed so seductively it started to induce cravings of emulating the sweet actions you so eloquently describe here..... Mmmmmmmmmmm-- once again you are in rare form....very yummy alltogether!!!
One question that I wanted to ask you because you used that phrase in another poem and I have never heard of it: What does it mean when you say:"You frantically gave me major brain"? Really curious if you could explain dear Sir...... :) ♡♡♡
One question that I wanted to ask you because you used that phrase in another poem and I have never heard of it: What does it mean when you say:"You frantically gave me major brain"? Really curious if you could explain dear Sir...... :) ♡♡♡
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re: Re: YOUR EYES DANCE
24th May 2014 9:15pm
Hey sweets, The term "BRAIN" is a slang for Blowjob or Head. I appreciate you always and THANXXX for the comment!!
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22nd May 2014 00:49am
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24th May 2014 9:16pm
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22nd May 2014 4:44am
"we start over with seventy-five take away six"
^^^ different spin with the wordplay,....I like different. :) Pen Love Lance~
^^^ different spin with the wordplay,....I like different. :) Pen Love Lance~
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24th May 2014 9:18pm
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22nd May 2014 6:57pm
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24th May 2014 9:19pm
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23rd May 2014 6:47pm
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24th May 2014 9:21pm
Thanxx in Lovely loads Ms. PD!!
Feels Great when you Stop by!!
Much Love!!
Feels Great when you Stop by!!
Much Love!!
Re: YOUR EYES DANCE
24th May 2014 10:37pm
You burn us with your intimate fire.. "A few mushroom too ball strokes, I stood crowbar stiff." I love this and the temple doors.. I see a spike in the pleasuring of pen... love it:)
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6th Jun 2014 8:08pm
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24th May 2014 11:48pm
So passionate, Lance, you carried me along with this erotic piece! Love it and feel, er, inspired :-) ... Great write!!!
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6th Jun 2014 8:15pm
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25th May 2014 10:37pm
Ya know my darling Lance, a lot of men should take notes from you my dear!
Exceptional write Sir!!!
Broomie ITRLIG!
Exceptional write Sir!!!
Broomie ITRLIG!
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6th Jun 2014 8:16pm
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28th May 2014 1:23am
we start over with seventy-five take away six.
a nice way to maths
and i can visualize a mandolino
a guy sent a dirty snap
twas like an elephants 60 inches
the mans maybe 15
ur sexy poetry is exquisite
well then ur a Sir
a nice way to maths
and i can visualize a mandolino
a guy sent a dirty snap
twas like an elephants 60 inches
the mans maybe 15
ur sexy poetry is exquisite
well then ur a Sir
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6th Jun 2014 8:14pm
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6th Jun 2014 8:12pm
Ms. Natural, I've missed you so much sweets.
Thanxxx for your support & Much respect!!
Thanxxx for your support & Much respect!!
Re: YOUR EYES DANCE
6th Jun 2014 12:33pm
So I guess Shakespeare was only partially correct - eyes are much more than windows to the soul, especially when they're dancing...well done Lance!
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8th Jun 2014 11:44pm
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8th Jun 2014 11:38pm
love the 75 take away 6.....
slow pistons up and down.....
love the descriptive writing.....
slow pistons up and down.....
love the descriptive writing.....
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8th Jun 2014 11:43pm
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30th Jun 2014 7:14pm