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'My-The-Illogical Climate'
*The statement in quotations at the beginning of this
was said to me by a coworker, I'm not sure who he was quoting
but he asked me to see if I could 'expand' on the thought
N if anyone knows me by now...well you know I HAD to
twist it up a bit! :) *
"What I've done in life
Echoes an eternity..."
It's 11: 57pm, yet awakened
my senses,
in tune with the consensus
that too many
lie in a senseless fog
n' since this is 2000+ years
man's progression has been logged
I wander within my 'cog-
-nay-cents'
isn't worth the price paid
from whence progress
had been made
when faced with the fact
that the mileage
in the age of man
leaves him stilled,
as he stands
idle...
in futile searches
for a past
foretold in days of old,
sadly lost
in a generational stranglehold
that seems bound n' determined
to be less than their worth
when God intended all
to shine brightly
like nuggets of pure gold...
As those who seek, will ever
ponder...
whatever became of we?
n' what have I done in this life
that will reverberate for an eternity..?
was said to me by a coworker, I'm not sure who he was quoting
but he asked me to see if I could 'expand' on the thought
N if anyone knows me by now...well you know I HAD to
twist it up a bit! :) *
"What I've done in life
Echoes an eternity..."
It's 11: 57pm, yet awakened
my senses,
in tune with the consensus
that too many
lie in a senseless fog
n' since this is 2000+ years
man's progression has been logged
I wander within my 'cog-
-nay-cents'
isn't worth the price paid
from whence progress
had been made
when faced with the fact
that the mileage
in the age of man
leaves him stilled,
as he stands
idle...
in futile searches
for a past
foretold in days of old,
sadly lost
in a generational stranglehold
that seems bound n' determined
to be less than their worth
when God intended all
to shine brightly
like nuggets of pure gold...
As those who seek, will ever
ponder...
whatever became of we?
n' what have I done in this life
that will reverberate for an eternity..?
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Re: 'My-The-Illogical Climate'
21st May 2014 2:43pm
WOW!! like..seriously WOW writing Sweet P :) truly enjoyed :) with love and respect..xoxo domore
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21st May 2014 2:45pm
Aaaawwww my dear sweet sweet woman
Gosh you gave me a huge smile! Thanks for that
n your support always :)
Gosh you gave me a huge smile! Thanks for that
n your support always :)
Re: 'My-The-Illogical Climate'
21st May 2014 2:46pm
fuck me sideways o.O this was mindblowing, Papi. loved this thought provoking write.
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re: Re: 'My-The-Illogical Climate'
21st May 2014 2:59pm
F U S!!? Hell yes! anytime baby! lol
Thank u my sweet Mami Mia! lol
You rock, n I appreciate you always :)
Thank u my sweet Mami Mia! lol
You rock, n I appreciate you always :)
Re: 'My-The-Illogical Climate'
21st May 2014 4:13pm
Life and living is like that, achievements and aspirations don't usually tally. Perseverance and to what end... food for thoughts there. Good read, Poetik.
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re: Re: 'My-The-Illogical Climate'
21st May 2014 5:58pm
Sweet sweet Grace, I feel so honored when you
Visit, thank you so much :) truly appreciate you
Visit, thank you so much :) truly appreciate you
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21st May 2014 11:37pm
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23rd May 2014 11:15am
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21st May 2014 5:21pm
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21st May 2014 6:09pm
Aaaawwww my dear, it's my pleasure to
leave you feeling like your time wasn't wasted :)
Truly appreciate you always :)
leave you feeling like your time wasn't wasted :)
Truly appreciate you always :)
Re: 'My-The-Illogical Climate'
21st May 2014 7:36pm
seriously expanding and branching out...interesting conversations you and your co-workers have :) fav line that rings for me "in futile searches
for a past
foretold in days of old,
sadly lost
in a generational stranglehold
"
for a past
foretold in days of old,
sadly lost
in a generational stranglehold
"
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23rd May 2014 11:19am
Interesting huh? I guess you'd be surprised if I told you
It came from a young kid (18) from a movie, n
asked me if I could write based on the quote...
Needless to say, it felt like a 'challenge'
Soooooo lol, n there you have the extent of our convo. Lol
Thank you my dear, you are always appreciated :)
It came from a young kid (18) from a movie, n
asked me if I could write based on the quote...
Needless to say, it felt like a 'challenge'
Soooooo lol, n there you have the extent of our convo. Lol
Thank you my dear, you are always appreciated :)
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21st May 2014 9:27pm
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23rd May 2014 11:24am
Sweetest Scarlett, thank you! So happy you liked this n deeply grateful I am for your support :)
Re: 'My-The-Illogical Climate'
22nd May 2014 4:41am
"that too many
lie in a senseless fog
n' since this is 2000+ years
man's progression has been logged
I wander within my 'cog-
-nay-cents'
isn't worth the price paid"<--smh at ya! You are the flippin bomb! An honor to know your Bic. :)
lie in a senseless fog
n' since this is 2000+ years
man's progression has been logged
I wander within my 'cog-
-nay-cents'
isn't worth the price paid"<--smh at ya! You are the flippin bomb! An honor to know your Bic. :)
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23rd May 2014 11:26am
Aaaaawwwww my Rain, my sweet sweet Rain... You make
my heart beat smiles for miles :) thank you sooooo much!
Appreciate the praise n support n I feel likewise bout ur pen too! :)
my heart beat smiles for miles :) thank you sooooo much!
Appreciate the praise n support n I feel likewise bout ur pen too! :)
Re: 'My-The-Illogical Climate'
22nd May 2014 9:57pm
Awesome and fascinating write, Poe. Agree with Katia, it's mindblowing. Always looking forward to your pieces!
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re: Re: 'My-The-Illogical Climate'
23rd May 2014 11:37am
You're such a flatterer lady! But hey it'll get you 'Everywhere' with me! Lmao... Truly, appreciate you forever my sweetness :)
Re: 'My-The-Illogical Climate'
23rd May 2014 6:46pm
Wonderful Ponderings Poetik..Excellent thought provoking Ink!!! enjoyed :)
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24th May 2014 4:43am
Thank you my sweetness I'm so happy you liked this spill
N as always appreciate you :)
N as always appreciate you :)
Re: 'My-The-Illogical Climate'
25th May 2014 3:39am
This has me pondering what is to be our collective hand print on the future? I really enjoyed the way this extends to society, far beyond one individual.
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re: Re: 'My-The-Illogical Climate'
25th May 2014 1:07pm
Knowing how you tend to think heavy thoughts
I must say I'm very flattered by your words n yea
I find myself wondering TOO bro. Thanks a ton :)
I must say I'm very flattered by your words n yea
I find myself wondering TOO bro. Thanks a ton :)