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Beautiful Disaster
I won't disappoint you
As you fall apart
Some things should be simple
Even an end has a start.......
Love...over..betrayal.."obligations?"...11/11/11
As you fall apart
Some things should be simple
Even an end has a start.......
Love...over..betrayal.."obligations?"...11/11/11
Published 15th May 2014
| Edited 12th Sep 2014
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15th May 2014 10:08pm
15th May 2014 10:14pm
16th May 2014 1:51am
I like the message and the simplicity of this write. you get it done with few words, I admire that.
16th May 2014 11:48am
I wish I had the time to write a book. I can relate to most of your inks and it kind of take me back when I was 5 ya 5 innocence...lol I also write (vent my views is more like it)with out thinking which is dangerous ...
16th May 2014 6:13pm
Explain if you can ...I know it's kind of "giving in" but that how society veiws women at time I take full advantage of it.lol
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Anonymous
29th Oct 2014 2:55pm
Awesome.. So much depth, in just a few lines.. Excellent work..
