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Your Dreams
I hope you dream
beautiful dreams,
full of wonder
joy and love,
sunshine explosions
with a million rainbows
filling the sky.
Polka dotted dragons
with butterfly wings
breathing jellybeans and gumdrops.
Valleys and hillsides covered
in daisies,tulips and lilies,
a true Monet,
with the sound of waterfalls
and babbling brooks
as angels sing
hallelujah,hallelujah.
Dream on...
beautiful dreams,
full of wonder
joy and love,
sunshine explosions
with a million rainbows
filling the sky.
Polka dotted dragons
with butterfly wings
breathing jellybeans and gumdrops.
Valleys and hillsides covered
in daisies,tulips and lilies,
a true Monet,
with the sound of waterfalls
and babbling brooks
as angels sing
hallelujah,hallelujah.
Dream on...
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13th May 2014 9:44pm
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13th May 2014 9:50pm
That's romantic and sweet, Hash. May those dreams come true! I love this piece!!! xx
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13th May 2014 11:21pm
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Oh Dear Grace,dreams can seem so real...thank you and yes angels, singing to you :)
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Re: Your Dreams
14th May 2014 00:39am
My Friend,
You weave such a spell of serene enchantment with this piece...your imagery so creative, and captivating!
I love the entire picture of "polka-dotted dragons, with butterfly wings....breathing gum-drops and jelly beans."
While this poem carries a tone of romanticism, it is definitely one that could be read to a child at bedtime.....soo charming!
You weave such a spell of serene enchantment with this piece...your imagery so creative, and captivating!
I love the entire picture of "polka-dotted dragons, with butterfly wings....breathing gum-drops and jelly beans."
While this poem carries a tone of romanticism, it is definitely one that could be read to a child at bedtime.....soo charming!
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14th May 2014 00:48am
DarkEnchantress you make me feel so warm inside...thank you always and don't forget to have some gum-drops and jelly beans tomorrow (peace) :)
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14th May 2014 1:06am
Dear Hashman....I shall indulge in the jelly-beans, and gumdrops--licorice is my favorite flavor, in both! :))
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Anonymous
14th May 2014 1:28am
This was very lovely to read.
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Anonymous
15th May 2014 2:39am
Sweet Friend.......this is stunning!!! It has a whimsical feel of heavenly dream come true. RL for me. Xo :)
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3rd Jun 2014 9:42am
I hope you dream beautiful dreams too and may they all come true in a beautiful way!!!
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