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simply eaten

Give me your sugar cane
feel how you melt inside
my mouth like an excellent meal
tommielynn
Written by tommielynn (Tommie Lynn)
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Re: simply eaten
(Unveiling)
8th May 2014 7:21pm
a very sensually delicious write lovely Tommie :) with love Crim
crimsin
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re: Re: simply eaten
(Tommie Lynn)
8th May 2014 8:01pm
Always appreciate your words Crim.  Thank you :)
tommielynn
Re: simply eaten
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8th May 2014 8:32pm
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Anonymous
re: Re: simply eaten
(Tommie Lynn)
8th May 2014 9:43pm
I always love when you read me Gabriel.  Thank you so very much. ;)
tommielynn
Re: simply eaten
8th May 2014 8:42pm
Less painful than the other kind of cane!
Solomon_Song
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re: Re: simply eaten
(Tommie Lynn)
8th May 2014 9:44pm
Lmao...thanks SS. :)
tommielynn
Re: simply eaten
8th May 2014 10:22pm
Sugar cane... I have to remember that one - good thing mi brujita isn't diabetic
LobodeSanPedro
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re: Re: simply eaten
(Tommie Lynn)
8th May 2014 10:39pm
LMFAO LSP thank you for that. :)
tommielynn
Re: simply eaten
8th May 2014 11:10pm
Sweet!

Need I say more?
Didn't think so.  ;)
VegasPoet
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re: Re: simply eaten
(Tommie Lynn)
9th May 2014 00:13am
Enough said.  :) thanks for reading.  :)
tommielynn
Re: simply eaten
(Osomajestuoso)
9th May 2014 5:44am
Salty and sweet is trending...slam! right in the cavity :)
Gahddess_Worship
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re: Re: simply eaten
(Tommie Lynn)
9th May 2014 10:19am
Appreciate you reading GW thank you :)
tommielynn
Re: simply eaten
13th May 2014 10:09pm
simply wonderful :)
Hashman
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re: Re: simply eaten
(Tommie Lynn)
13th May 2014 11:29pm
Thank you Hman ;)
tommielynn
Re: simply eaten
13th May 2014 11:01pm
Short and sweet a deadly combination. Enjoyed.
xmar82
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re: Re: simply eaten
(Tommie Lynn)
13th May 2014 11:30pm
Appreciate you reading xmar82 :)
tommielynn
Re: simply eaten
20th Jun 2014 10:37pm
You want fries with that? Lol
CasketSharpe
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re: Re: simply eaten
(Tommie Lynn)
22nd Jun 2014 3:08pm
And sassy sauce too CasketSharpe! :)
tommielynn

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