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I Couldn't Help But Cry
I couldn't help but cry when
I remebered everything
I forgot
I felt about you, that
I foolishly belived
I did not feel.
I couldn't help but cry when
I thought about how
I taught myself to say to myself, that
I didn't really love you as well.
I remebered everything
I forgot
I felt about you, that
I foolishly belived
I did not feel.
I couldn't help but cry when
I thought about how
I taught myself to say to myself, that
I didn't really love you as well.
Published 2nd May 2014
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2nd May 2014 5:05pm
reflection, realisation and regret, not the most satisfying threesome, yes?
i enjoyed this piece of palpable heartache, straight to the point without unnecessary frills.
i enjoyed this piece of palpable heartache, straight to the point without unnecessary frills.
2nd May 2014 5:17pm
2nd May 2014 8:21pm
masterweave equaling almost the revelation of intense tears that are nothing but loud truth-secretes over our deliberations- the numbness, the cowardice, the hapless situational captives we are. overly brimming read. thankyou!
2nd May 2014 11:52pm
2nd May 2014 11:52pm
4th May 2014 5:20pm
y've tapped the well of
stating simply
the absurd convolutions wee
disconciously
project into
the-already-illusory
thing called love
simply basso profundo
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