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Tone Deaf
The symphony
of crushing eggshells
under your padded feet
as you walk around me;
Reverberated and
reinforced by the
slumped soul
that sits amongst
the tone deaf cries
of defeat...
Darkness is not that
of a silk scarf
but of a blinding
tumble from
grace.
of crushing eggshells
under your padded feet
as you walk around me;
Reverberated and
reinforced by the
slumped soul
that sits amongst
the tone deaf cries
of defeat...
Darkness is not that
of a silk scarf
but of a blinding
tumble from
grace.
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2nd May 2014 00:29am
Words sometimes are the more beautiful creatures in times of miscommunicated passion... Thank you for reading me xx
Re: Tone Deaf
1st May 2014 1:51pm
The last line is why mankind has the written word! So profound and enlightening. Most excellent, miss!
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2nd May 2014 00:30am
Re: Tone Deaf
whatever the cause,
I love your response,
which certainly does
not lack grace...
I love your response,
which certainly does
not lack grace...
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