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Good Fuckin Riddance!
Finally...
It has ended
This B-Flick
Reality Show
we used to call a relationship
has seen its last episode
That's right...
It's..Over...
As I become fire & heat
because you...
Will never again
be able to find shade
in the coolness of my shadow
You...wont have relief...
Not today...Not from me
I hope my words cuts you like
daggers...
Yes...I want you to bleed
Why...
Because this shit is over...
No more excruciating conversations
with You and YOUR EGO
Now granted... in another life
You may have been a Captain
Or some kinda Super Hero
But... in this life
You are just the asshole
who has worked my nerves to Zero
With a brain the size
Of a Cheerio
My skin crawls
whenever you get near me Yo
We have beat this relationship
To Death...
YOU KNOW Im glad this shit is over
Thats why I wore this black dress
SO I could pay the death of this mess
My last respects...
It has ended
This B-Flick
Reality Show
we used to call a relationship
has seen its last episode
That's right...
It's..Over...
As I become fire & heat
because you...
Will never again
be able to find shade
in the coolness of my shadow
You...wont have relief...
Not today...Not from me
I hope my words cuts you like
daggers...
Yes...I want you to bleed
Why...
Because this shit is over...
No more excruciating conversations
with You and YOUR EGO
Now granted... in another life
You may have been a Captain
Or some kinda Super Hero
But... in this life
You are just the asshole
who has worked my nerves to Zero
With a brain the size
Of a Cheerio
My skin crawls
whenever you get near me Yo
We have beat this relationship
To Death...
YOU KNOW Im glad this shit is over
Thats why I wore this black dress
SO I could pay the death of this mess
My last respects...
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Re: Good Fuckin Riddance!
I'm first!
Holy shit Fire I really truly and seriously love this CLOSURE!!!!!!!
I hope soon I am where you are today
because sweetheart I need to be!!!!!
You are such a queen right now I can see it,
you casting your eyes to the hard left and meaning every fucking word you wrote!
There is and believe me, someone already waiting to meet you and when you are not looking he will find you...
Love
Zazzles
Holy shit Fire I really truly and seriously love this CLOSURE!!!!!!!
I hope soon I am where you are today
because sweetheart I need to be!!!!!
You are such a queen right now I can see it,
you casting your eyes to the hard left and meaning every fucking word you wrote!
There is and believe me, someone already waiting to meet you and when you are not looking he will find you...
Love
Zazzles
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1st May 2014 1:36am
Hey Zazzy!
Thank you for feelin this poem...
I was do angry when I wrote it I coulda spit nails girl...
but DAMN I FEEL Better LOL
xoxo
Fire
Thank you for feelin this poem...
I was do angry when I wrote it I coulda spit nails girl...
but DAMN I FEEL Better LOL
xoxo
Fire
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1st May 2014 1:34am
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1st May 2014 1:41am
Thank YOU Nikki!
I Love ALL your writes....you have such a talent for
detail and word imagery in your poems Nikkie
wish I could do poetry that is visually stunning as your work is!
Poetic Respect!
XOXO
Fire
I Love ALL your writes....you have such a talent for
detail and word imagery in your poems Nikkie
wish I could do poetry that is visually stunning as your work is!
Poetic Respect!
XOXO
Fire
Re: Good Fuckin Riddance!
1st May 2014 3:55am
....this serves as affirmation for the reply on my poem I just made to you, Fire.
Your 'Anger' ink is so wicked, the devil bow down to ya in amazement...
This freaking rocked Queen...Xo
Your 'Anger' ink is so wicked, the devil bow down to ya in amazement...
This freaking rocked Queen...Xo
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re: Re: Good Fuckin Riddance!
1st May 2014 11:41pm
Lady Rain,
Thank You!
and aint nothin like a sistah with an attitude!!LMAO
LMAO
FOr real!!
XO
Fire
Thank You!
and aint nothin like a sistah with an attitude!!LMAO
LMAO
FOr real!!
XO
Fire
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1st May 2014 4:22pm
OMG! Yes Maam tell it like it is, ashes to ashes and dust to dust!
XOXOX
Red
XOXOX
Red
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1st May 2014 11:43pm
Hey Mamacita!
Long Time No Hear we gotta catch up for real so much so much!!!inbox me and I will give you my new #
Long Time No Hear we gotta catch up for real so much so much!!!inbox me and I will give you my new #
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