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On you In me..see?
You do realise..
I'm good at pouncing
you will see
actually.. you wont
see
me
I'm feline
on you
in
me
before you see
see?
bet you do now
good good
now let it go
this cat desires all of it
need I say anymore?
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Re: On you In me..see?
30th Apr 2014 10:30pm
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30th Apr 2014 10:36pm
MeeeEOOOW!
Yes Solomon
thankfully he knows all about my pouncing moments
and what I desire from him when I do.. xD
Yes Solomon
thankfully he knows all about my pouncing moments
and what I desire from him when I do.. xD
re: re: Re: On you In me..see?
1st May 2014 10:41pm
The poem and the picture have inspired me to write a poem for the Erotic section which imagines the man's side of the story.
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2nd May 2014 1:49pm
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2nd May 2014 11:15pm
The pic (of a beauty which makes me easily imagine background music going on) inspired this joke caption, noticing the proximity of the radiator to her knee:
SHE: "The heating definitely works!"
SHE: "The heating definitely works!"
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2nd May 2014 11:59pm
Hehe yeah xD
or the chair toppling back at the point of
Their own tipping point. .
or the chair toppling back at the point of
Their own tipping point. .
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28th Sep 2014 9:04am
Inspired a much shorter version of this poem:
Getting to grips with my dear chap,
I come astride his waiting lap;
His manhood, reaching out to me,
Finds his place inside easily.
Getting to grips with my dear chap,
I come astride his waiting lap;
His manhood, reaching out to me,
Finds his place inside easily.
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28th Sep 2014 6:17pm
Thankyou Solomon
creativity is a blessed tool
glad my poetry piece inspired
i too get inspired by many writes on Dup
creativity is a blessed tool
glad my poetry piece inspired
i too get inspired by many writes on Dup
re: Re: On you In me..see?
30th Apr 2014 10:38pm
going by the picture I'd say it's not the only thing she's got of yours Hawk hehe
pouncing..it's all in the movement
pouncing..it's all in the movement
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30th Apr 2014 11:22pm
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3rd May 2014 5:22am
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Anonymous
26th Aug 2014 5:33pm
Wow, favorite poem of yours yet. Good stuff! Still have about 500 more to read though.... in due time.
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26th Aug 2014 6:54pm