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Love Slave
Captured
Willfully captured within the controlling moonlight
Dancing in its mist
The mist of Shadowed secrets
roaming free
unleashed from the Lunar heart beating
bleeding hidden wishes of the night
I am but a slave
Basking in its rays of carnal light
Servant of the night
I tend to his dark temptress
The queen of his blackness
The very being of his existence
Angelic lips echo cries of lust
Engorged crimson passion rages
Shackled to my rings of fire
Upon my lips blood wishes I can taste
Porcelain skin cracks
Feeding the hungers of the night
Gagged tears of my invasion
Quenching the shadows of plight
A toy used to serve an evil grin
A doll for the sins of delight
Swollen and ravaged
Body limp in the lunar light
We are but slaves
Slaves of the night
Loves slaves
Of Lunar light
Willfully captured within the controlling moonlight
Dancing in its mist
The mist of Shadowed secrets
roaming free
unleashed from the Lunar heart beating
bleeding hidden wishes of the night
I am but a slave
Basking in its rays of carnal light
Servant of the night
I tend to his dark temptress
The queen of his blackness
The very being of his existence
Angelic lips echo cries of lust
Engorged crimson passion rages
Shackled to my rings of fire
Upon my lips blood wishes I can taste
Porcelain skin cracks
Feeding the hungers of the night
Gagged tears of my invasion
Quenching the shadows of plight
A toy used to serve an evil grin
A doll for the sins of delight
Swollen and ravaged
Body limp in the lunar light
We are but slaves
Slaves of the night
Loves slaves
Of Lunar light
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Re: Love Slave
29th Apr 2014 4:27pm
Ah, the ominous, stark, darken essence of this piece reverberates in my soul. It feels like a song of praise to the enchantment of lustful indulgence. The pic is sexy. Mmm, my flavor of poetry.. inked to perfection, under the influence of an awakenedsoul!!
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29th Apr 2014 4:35pm
Sweet Angel, Love your comment, it says much about how I feel about this ink. Thoughts of you are felt, thank you
Re: Love Slave
29th Apr 2014 5:15pm
Your sensually dark moonlite depictions are my mid morning delights.. truly enjoyed this read..thank you for sharing... with deepest respect.. xoxo domore
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29th Apr 2014 5:27pm
Re: Love Slave
29th Apr 2014 5:46pm
dominance and sadism collide perfectly in this darkly sensual piece. tres belle, Sir.
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29th Apr 2014 6:57pm
Re: Love Slave
29th Apr 2014 6:08pm
"I am but a slave
Basking in its rays of carnal light" loved!
I can't find the words to describe how incredible this ink is, imagery included.
Another amazing piece my friend! Xo
Basking in its rays of carnal light" loved!
I can't find the words to describe how incredible this ink is, imagery included.
Another amazing piece my friend! Xo
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29th Apr 2014 7:00pm
Re: Love Slave
Anonymous
29th Apr 2014 6:12pm
Mmmmmm! This is dynamic! I must remember to read you when its cooler. This made feel like.....um.....dancing. you are such a talent. Enjoyed as always. Xo :)
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29th Apr 2014 7:02pm
I think you like to um.......dance a lot. It is always hot around you. :)
Re: Love Slave
30th Apr 2014 00:32am
Soul I'm enamored and enchanted with this seductive dark sensual write.. with love Crim :)
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30th Apr 2014 2:00pm
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30th Apr 2014 11:27pm
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1st May 2014 00:53am
Thank you Stormyystar, welcome to DUP. Look forward to reading your work.
Re: Love Slave
1st May 2014 4:48am
followed this to the very end and have reread many times... thank you so much for sharing this, a breathless piece xx
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1st May 2014 5:52am
Heart of Glass you make me smile, it is I however that is blessed for your gracious time and comments, thank you
Re: Love Slave
*I thought that this was absolutely flawless**!!
Bravo AwakendSoul Perfect!
Love Slave
Captured
Willfully captured within the controlling moonlight
Dancing in its mist
The mist of Shadowed secrets
roaming free
unleashed from the Lunar heart beating
bleeding hidden wishes of the night
I am but a slave
Basking in its rays of carnal light
Servant of the night
I tend to his dark temptress
The queen of his blackness
The very being of his existence <--- Particularly this
just love this verse it rocks hard body babe!
Angelic lips echo cries of lust
Engorged crimson passion rages
Shackled to my rings of fire
Upon my lips blood wishes I can taste
Porcelain skin cracks
Feeding the hungers of the night
Gagged tears of my invasion
Quenching the shadows of plight
A toy used to serve an evil grin
A doll for the sins of delight
Swollen and ravaged
Body limp in the lunar light
We are but slaves
Slaves of the night
Loves slaves
Of Lunar light
Pen hugs and love brother xxxx
Broomie
Bravo AwakendSoul Perfect!
Love Slave
Captured
Willfully captured within the controlling moonlight
Dancing in its mist
The mist of Shadowed secrets
roaming free
unleashed from the Lunar heart beating
bleeding hidden wishes of the night
I am but a slave
Basking in its rays of carnal light
Servant of the night
I tend to his dark temptress
The queen of his blackness
The very being of his existence <--- Particularly this
just love this verse it rocks hard body babe!
Angelic lips echo cries of lust
Engorged crimson passion rages
Shackled to my rings of fire
Upon my lips blood wishes I can taste
Porcelain skin cracks
Feeding the hungers of the night
Gagged tears of my invasion
Quenching the shadows of plight
A toy used to serve an evil grin
A doll for the sins of delight
Swollen and ravaged
Body limp in the lunar light
We are but slaves
Slaves of the night
Loves slaves
Of Lunar light
Pen hugs and love brother xxxx
Broomie
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re: Re: Love Slave
28th May 2014 12:57pm
oh Broomie, You are far to kind, but I will take it. I am most please to have been selected to be among your treasured binding of your personal fav of poems.
Thank you
Thank you
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28th May 2014 10:03pm
Re: Love Slave
16th Jul 2014 3:52pm
Excellent piece! This here?
"We are but slaves
Slaves of the night
Loves slaves " said it all for me!
Yup, I'm a fan :)
"We are but slaves
Slaves of the night
Loves slaves " said it all for me!
Yup, I'm a fan :)
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16th Jul 2014 4:09pm
The whole poem wrapped up in a sentence, it stands alone but holds the whole piece together. Thanks dude, always a thrill when others capture the defining moment as the writer intended.