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5:17- 4-27-2014 R.I.P. Daddy
...Brash, tough, smart
rough, hustling running
thru the streets, see
surviving became his art
early on as a young man
he won a woman's heart...
As the years spent together
amounted to a love for life
n' while seasons passed
offspring...they raised many,
thru the ceaseless turmoil n' strife...
Those 'Good Times' came
though mixed with a lot of bad
recollecting now makes me smile
over the craziness our home had
no recapturing the laughter
pains me deeply sad
He was a hard ass, sometimes
n' yet many times showed his heart
who could count those times
with a straight face, those
tall tales he'd impart
Truly talented in singing
n' spinning a story
also he was not too shabby
in the kitchen, baking biscuits glory
Seemed I'm guessing
he was 'Ripley's' cohort
n' it was as if he was a 'pied piper
of people' as he collected friends like it was a sport...
Flawed in more ways than one
but without doubt he's locked
n' loaded within in my memory's gun
A friend, a father, a husband
but there was so much left undone
still, what an intriguing life he lived
oh dear lord I wish he had at least
twenty more years to us he'd give...
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Re: 5-17-2014-R.I.P. Daddy
28th Apr 2014 00:55am
What a remarkable man your Dad was I'm sorry you didn't get more time with him Poe.. a beautiful dedication to his memory.. with love Crim
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28th Apr 2014 4:12pm
Re: 5-17-2014-R.I.P. Daddy
28th Apr 2014 1:43am
Beautifully written, Poetik. It makes me wish I had known him. Mine was the total opposite.
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28th Apr 2014 4:13pm
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Anonymous
28th Apr 2014 2:04am
Beautiful tribute! Very powerful emotional write. Thank you for sharing such a moving reflection of life. Xo :)
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28th Apr 2014 4:14pm
Re: 5-17-2014-R.I.P. Daddy
28th Apr 2014 2:18am
Awe, I feel you and you give him tremendous pleasuring in spirit doing what you do. A heartfelt remembrance. :)
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28th Apr 2014 4:15pm
Re: 5-17-2014-R.I.P. Daddy
28th Apr 2014 11:26am
Papi, we spoke about this a while ago and i hope you had your chance to say everything you needed to to each other.
many hugs xo
many hugs xo
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28th Apr 2014 4:15pm
Re: 5-17-2014-R.I.P. Daddy
28th Apr 2014 12:05pm
Beautiful write my dear friend (memories make life)...peace to you and your family :)
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28th Apr 2014 4:16pm
Re: 5-17-2014-R.I.P. Daddy
28th Apr 2014 6:03pm
this made my heart ache and smile at the same time...was truly a testiment of the impact he's had in your life...beautiful and touching dedication poetik -hugs
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28th Apr 2014 9:05pm
Re: 5-17-2014-R.I.P. Daddy
28th Apr 2014 6:44pm
...this is such a beautiful tribute Poe! Your words depict a great man, and I'm glad you shared his life's picture with us. My heart goes out to you and your family! Xoxo
*I'm a little confused on the title's date*
Poetic Love~
*I'm a little confused on the title's date*
Poetic Love~
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re: Re: 5-17-2014-R.I.P. Daddy
28th Apr 2014 8:57pm
Thank you
It's a typo. I meant to write, 5:17... That was the time of death
It's a typo. I meant to write, 5:17... That was the time of death
Re: 5-17-2014-R.I.P. Daddy
28th Apr 2014 7:06pm
a very heartfelt write.. you can sense the pain and pleasure of each memory within this ink....sincere condolences to you and your family.. with love and respect.. xoxo domore
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29th Apr 2014 3:30am
Re: 5:17- 4-27-2014 R.I.P. Daddy
29th Apr 2014 5:58am
To write so elegantly, in a time of mourning... speaks volumes. Sorry for your loss, Poetik. Hugs.
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29th Apr 2014 3:46pm
Re: 5:17- 4-27-2014 R.I.P. Daddy
5th May 2014 12:56pm
I'm sorry for your loss. May he rest peacefully. Beautiful words and tribute to his life. Sounds like an amazing dad. Very heartfelt and relatable. Thank you for sharing.
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6th May 2014 5:48am
Re: 5:17- 4-27-2014 R.I.P. Daddy
17th Jul 2014 8:27pm
This hits so close to home, it's like you just described my own father. Strange that this date was also my 30th birthday! I dig it so much, it brought me to tears! Great dedication.
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18th Jul 2014 3:44am
Happy belated BD... :) thank u as well for such a sweet comment... I. There with u my friend, n truly understand how u must feel.