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Ignorance
Master a title that commands respect.
I failed to grammatically genuflect.
My error politely pointed out by a D/s Ace
My sincere apologies for the accidental disgrace
To any and all who may have been offended
Disrespect to you was never intended
I understand that you may be seasoned and adept
However, I am green and just learning role of subordinate
(in my poem, Learning Restraint; I originally did not capitalize Master's. The error has been corrected, and I hope this serves as an adequate apology as well as explanation for my ignorance)
I failed to grammatically genuflect.
My error politely pointed out by a D/s Ace
My sincere apologies for the accidental disgrace
To any and all who may have been offended
Disrespect to you was never intended
I understand that you may be seasoned and adept
However, I am green and just learning role of subordinate
(in my poem, Learning Restraint; I originally did not capitalize Master's. The error has been corrected, and I hope this serves as an adequate apology as well as explanation for my ignorance)
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Re: Ignorance
i'm going to deviate from the poem a little with this comment, so apologies in advance...
i honestly don't understand how a so called D-type could get their frilly panties in a twist about capitalisation. why not get a pink badge declaring themselves a "twue domly dom" if they need to reinforce their own incredible domliness to themselves. lordi lord, if you have to remind someone of your über dominance, you're doing a shitty job of commanding submission.
Okay, off my soap box. this is well written, but a waste of your beautiful pen. the piece you referred to was well written and done so with much honestly. give the finger to anyone who feels like nit picking.
much love xo
i honestly don't understand how a so called D-type could get their frilly panties in a twist about capitalisation. why not get a pink badge declaring themselves a "twue domly dom" if they need to reinforce their own incredible domliness to themselves. lordi lord, if you have to remind someone of your über dominance, you're doing a shitty job of commanding submission.
Okay, off my soap box. this is well written, but a waste of your beautiful pen. the piece you referred to was well written and done so with much honestly. give the finger to anyone who feels like nit picking.
much love xo
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re: Re: Ignorance
26th Apr 2014 4:35pm
Thank you so much miss m.. I appreciate your honest straight forwardness ... I fantasize and then convert to poetry.. the "piece referred" was that.. an extension of my fantasy not of my lifestyle...Ignorance of things, however is no excuse to offend..therefore a correction and apology was warranted...with deepest respect and love.. xoxo domore
Re: Ignorance
26th Apr 2014 3:45pm
oh lovely one don't let them get you down.. you are the perfect submissive as you are.. with love Crim
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26th Apr 2014 4:37pm
Thank you Crim, your words always inspire and encourage.. I need to say however.. I am submissive only in my fantasies.. with love and the deepest respect..xoxo domore
Re: Ignorance
26th Apr 2014 4:18pm
Truth be told, I was the one who instructed her to make the changes.
It reads correctly now and is an awesome piece of D/s writing.
It reads correctly now and is an awesome piece of D/s writing.
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26th Apr 2014 4:42pm
Thank you dear Sir.. you know I'd not want to accidentally offend.. and I appreciate the heads up to that potential. with respect..xoxo domore
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Anonymous
26th Apr 2014 5:14pm
Uh oh! All your writes are brilliant my Lady. I make mistakes in my poems all the time. LOL!!! Learn to laugh and write on my friend. If the suggestion fits then change it....if not then leave it. This shows how tender your heart is, thank you or sharing it with us. Xo :)
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28th Apr 2014 7:00am
Lovely Flower.. your kindness and warm thoughts always touch my heart.. thank you.. hugs..with love and respect..xoxo domore
Re: Ignorance
27th Apr 2014 2:06am
You have my respect comrade! Very admirable you'd write this apology even though you need no validation from ignorant critics. Well written, much enjoyed!
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Thank you TheP..for the read..the thoughtful comment..I am glad you enjoyed.. with respect..domore
I am humbled by the RL add..
I am humbled by the RL add..
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28th Apr 2014 7:04am
Thank you Hash.. I appreciate very much :) with my sincere respect to you.. domore
Re: Ignorance
29th Apr 2014 5:50pm
Apology accepted, Pleased by your innocents and your willingness to understand and your thirst to learn....however corrective behavior is still required...........go stand in a corner until I call upon you for your punishment
Sorry I couldn't help myself, seemed appropriate considering the subject matter. Sincere ink lady Domore
Sorry I couldn't help myself, seemed appropriate considering the subject matter. Sincere ink lady Domore
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29th Apr 2014 7:37pm
I am fortunate indeed.. whether now or later.. I will be waiting in my fantasies Sir :)
Thank you Awakened.. your words have made me smile today.. appreciate the read and lovely comment :)
with deepest respect.. domore
Thank you Awakened.. your words have made me smile today.. appreciate the read and lovely comment :)
with deepest respect.. domore