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Cold Soup
To alleviate
all that pain
you speak of
I would have
to blow your
fucking head off
to release it,
being a decent person
the only bullet I have
is for myself,
and it's silver
just in case
I turn into a werewolf,
which is more likely
then you turning
into a man.
all that pain
you speak of
I would have
to blow your
fucking head off
to release it,
being a decent person
the only bullet I have
is for myself,
and it's silver
just in case
I turn into a werewolf,
which is more likely
then you turning
into a man.
Published 25th Apr 2014
| Edited 27th Apr 2014
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Anonymous
26th Apr 2014 1:11am
Damn! Nice! Nice quick shot to the dome.... Good one! Mike.
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Anonymous
26th Apr 2014 1:35pm
Sometimes even bullets bounce back, great anger write....
26th Apr 2014 8:50pm
I take it, from the tone of this work Nikki,that may not be too fond of the fellow!
Good write girl!
Good write girl!
27th Apr 2014 4:23am
Slam dunk!
I love this nikkimoe so direct and to the point.
There is no misunderstanding, this is flawless!
Zazzles
I love this nikkimoe so direct and to the point.
There is no misunderstanding, this is flawless!
Zazzles
Anonymous
27th Apr 2014 2:35pm
Leave it to you to make me break the silence... cuts to the core, nice!
Perfect piece but for one *sliver*. (I know you know but now you know I know what you know. You thought 'fuck it' but it keeps jabbing me in the eye. C'mon!)
Perfect piece but for one *sliver*. (I know you know but now you know I know what you know. You thought 'fuck it' but it keeps jabbing me in the eye. C'mon!)
lol...I didn't even notice that, figures....me and my stupid spelling mistakes..oh and my grammar blows
I don't really re read what I write, I am notorious for that and have this weird idea that I'm not an editor and fixing my shit is below me :) but it shouldn't be...so yeah I'll fix that..thanks Scat....
I don't really re read what I write, I am notorious for that and have this weird idea that I'm not an editor and fixing my shit is below me :) but it shouldn't be...so yeah I'll fix that..thanks Scat....
Anonymous
27th Apr 2014 2:51pm
*Big-ass grin* I feel ya, Nikki, and usually let it go but this was too close to the slam-dunk it was meant to be. You're a doll!
