Senryū Trio

Wow what a deeply sensual, sexy write Atakti :) with love Crim

I'm pleased you think so, Crim... Thank you.

There's nothing like reading the phrase "deep stroke explosions" while on my break... a good read has been had again

Hahaha, JC, I do hope that made your break a fun one!

Thank you...

They all were good, don't get me wrong, but Orchard! That brought the house down!!

much love!

Smiling at that, Glynis...

:)

Thank you, hun.

Ooooh...
Atakti and her pen
Sitting in a tree
Writing poems about sex
Not one, but three!
Hehe :)

Hehehe, gods bless you Dys, that made me laugh! Your reaction is priceless.

a poem can change one word, many places forever, stop the heart, unlearn civilization in a growl, the carnal orchard of this will ride to my skin on many hot days and when the first peaches come in summer (i've got four peach trees out back that will blooming soon with bouqueta of pink you soon)

Well, wow, Sem, what a beautiful compliment... I hope you share some pics and words with us when the peaches blossom, and ripen.

Thank you.

Daaaaaayyyyuuummmnnnn this is exceptional!! I loved these lil bursts of brilliance my friend :)

Thank you, Poetik, and I love these lil bursts of appreciation!

:)

Ut oh! A three-alarmer! I like the sequence to the build and the earthiness. Fire has the nod with the climax!  

Jake's alarms are going off, stand back...

Thank you, pleased you like them.

:)

OMG !!...

Such sensual Senryu--

concise, sizzling, ("Fire"), luscious ("Orchard"), drowning -in- the- depths-of-passion ("Sea") imagery! :)

Atakti, my friend, I believe that you may have just found your new poetic genre!!

I'm not sure I could keep this pace, exhausting you know! Ha.

Thank you Dark Enchantress, for your lovely feedback, you have such graceful insights.

ahhh human weakness...
you manage to combine lust with a hint of haiku!
sweet construction of syllables my dear    ;)

Pleased this caught your eye, Cesar, thank you!

Juicy,wet and hot...and sweet :)

Thank you, Hashman...

Pleased you like the trio! Clever comments...

Would love to have seen you win this one... your entries are not only beautifully erotic and compelling, with lush imagery, they are consistent within themselves and as a whole...

Too kind, Kitten, too kind.

Yeah, well, the comp inspired, so I'm happy enough!

Gabriel, so glad you stumbled on these...

Merci beaucoup!