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the golden god
Sent to this dimension as punishment
our creator has parents, brothers and sisters
ones that shunned him long ago
he created for himself a golden woman
who wanted a daughter, her wish was granted
time passed and her passion grew ice cold for her golden god
she was allowed in the dimension he was from
frequently visiting there so she could fuck around
the man broken, his passion was stoked for his daughter
he was in love with her
so one night he stole Alanis's purity
she became pregnant
fearing his ice queen would find out
he sent Alanis to a different dimension
she was lonely but she had her baby she named Lucifer
together they created trees, flowers and all things lovely
this was baby Lucifer's nursery
though she was ashamed of her father, she adored Lucifer
when He was but a teen her queen and mother
decided to be cruel and take Him from her
she stayed in exile alone
while her father wiped Lucifer's memories of her
the queen took Him as her lover
she was vicious and so was the golden god
who never claimed Him as his son
time passed and Alanis the daughter he exiled
was once again allowed to walk among them
she was so proud of Him second in command
the queen in her wickedness couldn't resist herself
so one day she told Lucifer where He had truly sprung
a terrible war was raged in the heavens
Lucifer was in an insane rage being kept from his beautiful mother
as well as being used as the queens plaything
and never being claimed as god's first son
He vowed to destroy everything created by god's cruel hands
wanting His mother to war with Him, he didn't understand
the golden god would rather kill Alanis
rather than let her leave with Him
she was kept in a cell waiting to be born in a flesh tin can
being promised this was her only chance to prove Lucifer pure
despite being born of her father's evil desire
Lucifer is in a rage, this is His playground
he vows to shake all dimensions to the ground
than let His mother bow down
Published 21st Apr 2014
| Edited 10th Jun 2016
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21st Apr 2014 10:42pm
Literary brilliance, Crim. You amaze with your knowledge of these fascinating worlds from beyond. Intensely entertaining, *Bows to you*
21st Apr 2014 10:50pm
thank you most graciously beautiful Angel.. though I have no first hand knowledge of it or how it came about I believe Lucifer to be the first born Son.. with love Crim
Lucifer rises in again in your work.
Your fascination is powerful and plays well.
The dance marches on ...
Your fascination is powerful and plays well.
The dance marches on ...
22nd Apr 2014 1:20am
thank you Poet yes I have a deep love for Him so He will be surfacing in my writes.. with respect Brenda
22nd Apr 2014 00:29am
A generous dose of myth precisely mixed with a bottle of reality. Possible category, 'Mythical Realism.'
Greatness.
Lovely Brenda rocks!
Greatness.
Lovely Brenda rocks!
22nd Apr 2014 1:21am
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22nd Apr 2014 2:18am
Wow! As usual a breathtaking write. I really enjoyed this amazing story. Thank you for opening your brilliant mind and imagination to us. Xo :)
22nd Apr 2014 2:52pm
22nd Apr 2014 4:33am
that's murderous story telling, Crim. I love the way the ice queen 'fcks around'...
22nd Apr 2014 2:53pm
22nd Apr 2014 12:56pm
This is really good. The concept and perspective is quite intriguing, definitely worth the read.
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22nd Apr 2014 3:57pm
this is a refreshingly different piece, Brenda. i loved your dark story telling.
22nd Apr 2014 4:07pm
22nd Apr 2014 5:11pm
Damn Brenda, you've gone professional
on us.
This was excellent writing and story-telling
from you.
I love the theme and the style from your pen.
I'd like to sit at your feet and let you tell me
this story, (and take notes). :-)
Majestic... Light and Love, Pan
on us.
This was excellent writing and story-telling
from you.
I love the theme and the style from your pen.
I'd like to sit at your feet and let you tell me
this story, (and take notes). :-)
Majestic... Light and Love, Pan
22nd Apr 2014 5:17pm
Thank you Pan you put a smile on my face that will last a week.. you've so honored me with your comments and add.. with love and light Brenda :)
Anonymous
22nd Apr 2014 5:41pm
Leave it to you to pen poems of dark literary concepts. . .mythological, mid-evil, historical, renaissance, dark romanticism, etc. etc., it doesn't matter for you are brilliant in your writes, Crim. Peace, with respect, Devlin:)
22nd Apr 2014 5:49pm
thank you most graciously Devlin for showing love for this ink :) with love and respect Crim
22nd Apr 2014 11:16pm
Interesting and well crafted ink my friend!! I raise my glass to you for such imagery and creativity in your storytelling.. with love xoxo domore
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23rd Apr 2014 5:24am
...a very interesting and entertaining read, Crim.
The storyline was so easy to follow and it held my attention from the very beginning. I really enjoyed reading this... :) Xo
The storyline was so easy to follow and it held my attention from the very beginning. I really enjoyed reading this... :) Xo
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23rd Apr 2014 6:16pm
thank you lovely one.. so you want a sequel.. i'll see what I can do.. with love Crim :)
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24th Apr 2014 9:24pm
As someone raised on the Bible all my life and as of these past few years been questioning it all... this was a very intriguing take on Lucifer... Makes the mind wonder. I love mythology... it fascinates me.
24th Apr 2014 10:28pm
I too question Kitty I mean He's allowed so much freedom something's up right.. with love Crim :)
Anonymous
27th Dec 2014 7:11pm
A masterpiece! Wow...I am speechless by your first hand knowledge and by your amazing talent in writing this peice.
My beautiful Sister..you are deeply intriugining! X
My beautiful Sister..you are deeply intriugining! X
27th Dec 2014 8:01pm
thank you lovely one such a gracious comment making my week :) with love Brenda
