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Hardkore!
Trippin on hard rock & capricious porn vids
she automatically drops to her knees when
the cameras start rollin, fuckin's a chore
but suckin's a breeze, naked dudes walk in
w/cocks hard from the fluffs who earn their
pay, end the day w/lockjaw, no need to wear
shades, the camera never looks at their eyes,
A fat cock is their disguise, one by one
they fuck her mouth, grab her hair, smack her ass
jerk her around like a boneless ragdoll, she's
a cocksucker who can't get enough, likes it rough
cum on my face, cum in my mouth she yells, it
makes em harder & hotter & they ganger & banger
shoot big gobs of cream, like target practice
it makes her dirty & it makes her pretty
it's all so pure, it's all a disgrace
her name is Karess, she likes cum on her face...
Published 14th Apr 2014
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14th Apr 2014 12:42pm
14th Apr 2014 1:49pm
i love the earthiness of the language used here, Mister Feddeler, adds to the very primal feel of this piece.
enjoyed.
enjoyed.
14th Apr 2014 4:51pm
written with such an animalistic quality to it.. devouring cum for the camera I love it :) with respect Crim
14th Apr 2014 8:05pm
your poem made me think what a bravery & selfconfidence have to have a woman for such a job..
15th Apr 2014 3:09am
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14th Apr 2014 8:37pm
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15th Apr 2014 6:59am
I vividly watched porn through your pen, i guess Hardkore but women are many things...the contradictory complexities we are!
Lovin' this!!
Lovin' this!!
15th Apr 2014 4:18pm
Hot. Sexy. Hard. Hunger. Salivating sunrise. Money is good, though. You just inspired me. Salivating sunrise, my next savoring. Thanks, John. And I love her name btw.
19th May 2014 1:36pm
Hi John,
Absolutely brilliant! Very descriptive. Very erotic.Very dirty.It's on my reading list.
More please!
All The Best,
Danny
Absolutely brilliant! Very descriptive. Very erotic.Very dirty.It's on my reading list.
More please!
All The Best,
Danny
28th May 2014 3:23am
I found this extremely erotic*!
Good god babe, you write so fucking sexy John!
>it makes her dirty & it makes her pretty
it's all so pure, it's all a disgrace
her name is Karess, she likes cum on her face...
Caliente*
Broom
Good god babe, you write so fucking sexy John!
>it makes her dirty & it makes her pretty
it's all so pure, it's all a disgrace
her name is Karess, she likes cum on her face...
Caliente*
Broom
