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There was a time
Pants hanging in the closet
shirts gathering dust
shoes on the floor
slippers by the door
body lying in bed
empty soul.
Mind wandering in and out
words come and go
blank stares,questions unanswered
wondering why,asking how
telling stories,forgetting names.
A quick smile
somethings there,then it's gone.
There was a time
when she danced and laughed.
shirts gathering dust
shoes on the floor
slippers by the door
body lying in bed
empty soul.
Mind wandering in and out
words come and go
blank stares,questions unanswered
wondering why,asking how
telling stories,forgetting names.
A quick smile
somethings there,then it's gone.
There was a time
when she danced and laughed.
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11th Apr 2014 00:40am
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Anonymous
11th Apr 2014 1:00am
Awe! Sad......she has lost what is inside herself. Just my take and feel. LOL!!! :)
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11th Apr 2014 1:41am
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11th Apr 2014 4:58pm
I wonder if there are some happy memories floating inside....like the time they giggled as they ran...played dress up...fell in love.
Heart felt
Heart felt
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12th Apr 2014 1:39am
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12th Apr 2014 00:26am
I found sadness, regretting the now, missing what use to be. Nicely penned, Hash..Xo
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12th Apr 2014 1:47am
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14th Apr 2014 8:53pm
If they forget why they are there,
have nothing left to share
and no longer care if you still care
was there ever a time when love was fair?
To New Loves
have nothing left to share
and no longer care if you still care
was there ever a time when love was fair?
To New Loves
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