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Love Sounds from the room next door
On tuesday I hear them through the walls;
Just got paid they gone all bold
swimming in lovers dreams;
you take your glasses off looking away
as if I was going to say..
It's funny how I imagined the love
sounds from the room next door;
Maybe I just forgot the moment
I became the person crying more.
And I wanted you to be my pilot
taking me up over the sea;
you'd land on some quiet island
under palm trees you and me.
It's funny how I imagined the love
sounds from the room next door;
Maybe I just forgot the moment
I became the person crying more.
Our names still there carved in the wood..
overgrown where you once laid;
now we lay like statues;
even if we just got paid..
It's funny how I imagined the love
sounds from the room next door;
Maybe I just forgot the moment
I became the person crying more.
It's funny how I imagined the love
sounds from the room next door..
My poor attempt at song writing* xD
Just got paid they gone all bold
swimming in lovers dreams;
you take your glasses off looking away
as if I was going to say..
It's funny how I imagined the love
sounds from the room next door;
Maybe I just forgot the moment
I became the person crying more.
And I wanted you to be my pilot
taking me up over the sea;
you'd land on some quiet island
under palm trees you and me.
It's funny how I imagined the love
sounds from the room next door;
Maybe I just forgot the moment
I became the person crying more.
Our names still there carved in the wood..
overgrown where you once laid;
now we lay like statues;
even if we just got paid..
It's funny how I imagined the love
sounds from the room next door;
Maybe I just forgot the moment
I became the person crying more.
It's funny how I imagined the love
sounds from the room next door..
My poor attempt at song writing* xD
Published 7th Apr 2014
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7th Apr 2014 4:47pm
Poor? Nah it was actually pretty damn good...
At the very least it made for better thought content
than the crap that's out there now! :)
At the very least it made for better thought content
than the crap that's out there now! :)
7th Apr 2014 5:01pm
aww thankyou
i was thinking slow acustic rather than fast loud
it goes well with slow i feel
thankyou Poe:)
i was thinking slow acustic rather than fast loud
it goes well with slow i feel
thankyou Poe:)
9th Apr 2014 1:52am
Rose, the singer/songwriter? I would pay to hear it.
I like this....it seems to come from the heart.
I like this....it seems to come from the heart.
9th Apr 2014 5:58am
