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Behind The First Kiss
He walks me to my door
we look at each other
waiting for that moment
we both nervous
he laughed
staring straight in my eyes
leans slightly towards me
thanks me for a great time
looking subtly at my lips
kisses me with passion
his body hot on me
feeling it in my bones
reaching from head to toe
his lips were soft
his tongue sweet
swirving around
what a great kisser
I wanted more
for it to last forever
he leaned back
smiling with desire
until the next time we meet
we look at each other
waiting for that moment
we both nervous
he laughed
staring straight in my eyes
leans slightly towards me
thanks me for a great time
looking subtly at my lips
kisses me with passion
his body hot on me
feeling it in my bones
reaching from head to toe
his lips were soft
his tongue sweet
swirving around
what a great kisser
I wanted more
for it to last forever
he leaned back
smiling with desire
until the next time we meet
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Re: Behind The First Kiss
7th Apr 2014 3:27pm
"he leaned back
smiling with desire " That look---shaking my head at the memories of the look! :) Enjoyed this!
smiling with desire " That look---shaking my head at the memories of the look! :) Enjoyed this!
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Re: Behind The First Kiss
7th Apr 2014 3:30pm
Re: Behind The First Kiss
7th Apr 2014 3:30pm
You really captured the moment and the tension behind the first kiss
well done
well done
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re: Re: Behind The First Kiss
7th Apr 2014 3:34pm
Re: Behind The First Kiss
7th Apr 2014 5:51pm
having reached the goal
i wouldn't resist
in kicking the ball into the goal
he must have been too shy
i feel a nice guy
but when two kiss
jeans normally fly
I wonder why
he did not try
perhaps he felt a bit scared
ere you flared
next time he may cum
and stay
hopefully tomorrow
may we say
i wouldn't resist
in kicking the ball into the goal
he must have been too shy
i feel a nice guy
but when two kiss
jeans normally fly
I wonder why
he did not try
perhaps he felt a bit scared
ere you flared
next time he may cum
and stay
hopefully tomorrow
may we say
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re: Re: Behind The First Kiss
9th Apr 2014 2:29pm
re: re: Re: Behind The First Kiss
9th Apr 2014 6:56pm
u excite
and the mind draws
the ink is pure
virgin ---ary imagination
take it with a pounch of rock-hard salt
on a hard on
then kiss on
and the mind draws
the ink is pure
virgin ---ary imagination
take it with a pounch of rock-hard salt
on a hard on
then kiss on
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Re: Behind The First Kiss
8th Apr 2014 7:44pm
re: Re: Behind The First Kiss
9th Apr 2014 2:29pm
Re: Behind The First Kiss
9th Apr 2014 3:57pm
I can assure you that he felt it in his bones from head to toe.
I like this description.
Well written.
Jay
I like this description.
Well written.
Jay
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9th Apr 2014 4:07pm
Re: Behind The First Kiss
8th May 2014 1:35am
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9th May 2014 4:34pm