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Who is the Master
Heated flesh, sweat glistening, passionately bruised
My weakness and my strength in sinful delight.
Every place but one you've greedily abused
My weekly heavenly torment and dark side Friday night.
Aching arms in this position of reverent praise
Submissive pose with hands bound tight
Face down, knees spread wide, forbidden to speak your name
The urge to cry out, you think I fight.
With knowledge of the pain to come
I cut my eyes to gaze upon your face
Marveling at how a simple move can make you come undone
You reach for me with masculine fluid grace.
A hard smack to cheek for such behavior
The slight taste of blood on tongue is what I crave
Biting lips I draw it out.. enjoying pain my only savior.
With leather lash, punishment inflicted on your slave.
With eager wantonness I lose my self in game we play
The best for last you always save
Kneeling behind me pulling hair tight, it's time I pray
Finally exploring deep within my honeyed cave
No need to be dominated, its the pain I truly seek
Pushing my limits of self and pleasure
In this role you willing and ruthlessly give me what I need
You getting your release from dominant role you treasure.
I bow my head and moan my rapture with devilish grin
As your hips move into me ever faster
In truth, I've made you give me what I want-- again
I play my part well, letting you believe that you are master.
My weakness and my strength in sinful delight.
Every place but one you've greedily abused
My weekly heavenly torment and dark side Friday night.
Aching arms in this position of reverent praise
Submissive pose with hands bound tight
Face down, knees spread wide, forbidden to speak your name
The urge to cry out, you think I fight.
With knowledge of the pain to come
I cut my eyes to gaze upon your face
Marveling at how a simple move can make you come undone
You reach for me with masculine fluid grace.
A hard smack to cheek for such behavior
The slight taste of blood on tongue is what I crave
Biting lips I draw it out.. enjoying pain my only savior.
With leather lash, punishment inflicted on your slave.
With eager wantonness I lose my self in game we play
The best for last you always save
Kneeling behind me pulling hair tight, it's time I pray
Finally exploring deep within my honeyed cave
No need to be dominated, its the pain I truly seek
Pushing my limits of self and pleasure
In this role you willing and ruthlessly give me what I need
You getting your release from dominant role you treasure.
I bow my head and moan my rapture with devilish grin
As your hips move into me ever faster
In truth, I've made you give me what I want-- again
I play my part well, letting you believe that you are master.
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Re: Who is the Master
6th Apr 2014 7:57am
tastefully topping from the bottom... who could blame a girl when such sinful delights are on offer.
a wonderfully sensual write to whet the appetite on a Sunday morning.
a wonderfully sensual write to whet the appetite on a Sunday morning.
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re: Re: Who is the Master
6th Apr 2014 8:12pm
Who could blame a girl indeed! Thank you winter for the wonderful comment and read :) I am glad you enjoyed and it kicked off your Sunday morning right :) with respect xoxo domore
Re: Who is the Master
6th Apr 2014 1:42pm
So many sides to you intense domore.
Thank you for your lovely exposure to your darker side. You give me courage to continue on the journey.
xx
Thank you for your lovely exposure to your darker side. You give me courage to continue on the journey.
xx
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re: Re: Who is the Master
6th Apr 2014 8:15pm
You are MOST welcome Poet :) I am ever grateful for the RL add :) You sir, are the one who gives courage..with love and respect.. xoxo domore
Re: Who is the Master
6th Apr 2014 2:11pm
You captured it.. Love the reality that the ones who feel they ae in control are just playing a part.. And it's good to self courage in your writes..
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re: Re: Who is the Master
6th Apr 2014 8:18pm
Thank you 7th for getting this write. Your words are always appreciated .. with deepest respect.. xoxo domore
Re: Who is the Master
Anonymous
7th Apr 2014 3:52am
You heated this up my friend. Master you have made him feel. Excellent write! Xo :)
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re: Re: Who is the Master
7th Apr 2014 4:51am
Hehehe Thank you Lovely Flower :) You make me smile with your comment ---sending hugs your way xoxo with love and respect domore
Re: Who is the Master
7th Apr 2014 4:53am
re: Re: Who is the Master
7th Apr 2014 5:03am
Crim.. my wonderfully strong friend, I am so glad you liked :) with my deepest respect and much love ..xoxo domore
Re: Who is the Master
8th Apr 2014 9:07pm
Lovely thoughts provoked, I have often hinted upon the very thoughts you inked. Truth be told, they need each other. Great ink
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re: Re: Who is the Master
8th Apr 2014 9:56pm
Thank you Awakened :) indeed.. they do need eachother :) providing balance to eachother so to speak :) with respect.. xoxo domore
Re: Who is the Master
9th Apr 2014 3:33pm
To feel like the master...such a great compliment
to your man you pay, whether he's truly charge
matters not when he's made to believe, it's of great benefit to both... Surprised to know there are so many women here who live/love this lifestyle, I must be living on another planet
becuz in life I've never met your type of woman lol
to your man you pay, whether he's truly charge
matters not when he's made to believe, it's of great benefit to both... Surprised to know there are so many women here who live/love this lifestyle, I must be living on another planet
becuz in life I've never met your type of woman lol
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re: Re: Who is the Master
9th Apr 2014 4:10pm
:) lol we are indeed here Poet :) and I'm almost certain you walk among women regularly, who have this secret darker side ;) with respect xoxo domore
Re: Who is the Master
10th Apr 2014 11:12pm
absolutely dominating ;D Love the poem it was as though it was playing out right before my eyes and as it got to the end it was though w secret revealed that only she and the reader would know. many kudos
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re: Re: Who is the Master
10th Apr 2014 11:46pm
Thank you Moonlite :) you humble me with your words and with the RL add :) I am soo glad you enjoyed this! with deepest respect xoxo domore
Re: Who is the Master
11th Apr 2014 1:55am
this is a well crafted trip. secrets sleep peacefully when desires are met...
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re: Re: Who is the Master
11th Apr 2014 4:08pm
indeed they do John.. indeed they do! Thank you for the read and for the wonderful comment.. with deepest respect. xoxo domore
Re: Who is the Master
5th Aug 2014 6:09pm
I don't have the ability
to say such kind words
as said above
by poetic stalwarts
to say such kind words
as said above
by poetic stalwarts
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