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How I See It...
*To any n all that may be curious... This is the very first
ever publically posted piece I've done*
I SUPPOSE I’M OPPOSED
TO THOSE WHO PROPOSE:
“THAT THINGS ARE APPROS’ TO THEM IN THE KNOW.."
BUT THAT’S NOT HOW I SEE IT
THEN AGAIN LET’S SAY WHEN-
THEY ASCEND TO A HIGHER PLANE
(OF THINKING)…
COULD IT BE HOW EYES SEE IT?
THOUGH THEY DOUBT,
AND THEY POUT,
GO ABOUT WITH THINGS THAT HAVE CLOUT
LET’S NOT SHOUT...
IN OTHER’S EYE’S THEY DEPISE ,TELLING LIES
THEY DISGUISE THEIR TRUE INTEND
THEIR MONEY’S (INTEGRITY) SPENT!
THAT’S HOW I SEE IT-
IN EVERY BIT OF MY HEART
RIGHT FROM THE START
I CAN FEEL THEY CAN’T MAINTAIN
WITH SO MUCH TO GAIN
IF I REMAIN IN THE GAME
(OF LIFE) SO REALIZE THAT THRU MY EYE’S
AND STAY WISE (ONE)…
NOW I’M DONE WITH THIS SON
WITH THIS FLOW AND SO YO!
YOU KNOW THIS, IS “HOW I SEE IT!!”
ever publically posted piece I've done*
I SUPPOSE I’M OPPOSED
TO THOSE WHO PROPOSE:
“THAT THINGS ARE APPROS’ TO THEM IN THE KNOW.."
BUT THAT’S NOT HOW I SEE IT
THEN AGAIN LET’S SAY WHEN-
THEY ASCEND TO A HIGHER PLANE
(OF THINKING)…
COULD IT BE HOW EYES SEE IT?
THOUGH THEY DOUBT,
AND THEY POUT,
GO ABOUT WITH THINGS THAT HAVE CLOUT
LET’S NOT SHOUT...
IN OTHER’S EYE’S THEY DEPISE ,TELLING LIES
THEY DISGUISE THEIR TRUE INTEND
THEIR MONEY’S (INTEGRITY) SPENT!
THAT’S HOW I SEE IT-
IN EVERY BIT OF MY HEART
RIGHT FROM THE START
I CAN FEEL THEY CAN’T MAINTAIN
WITH SO MUCH TO GAIN
IF I REMAIN IN THE GAME
(OF LIFE) SO REALIZE THAT THRU MY EYE’S
AND STAY WISE (ONE)…
NOW I’M DONE WITH THIS SON
WITH THIS FLOW AND SO YO!
YOU KNOW THIS, IS “HOW I SEE IT!!”
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Re: How I See It...
5th Apr 2014 7:44pm
holy crap on a cracker, Poe, easy on the caps lock lol o.O i feel totally chastised.
telling it the way it is, the way only you can. epic.
telling it the way it is, the way only you can. epic.
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re: Re: How I See It...
5th Apr 2014 9:01pm
Lmao the all caps WAS intentional
N I'm sorry bout your ears my beauty, BUT I wanted to make sure I was heard lol... Thank u so much my sweetheart :)
N I'm sorry bout your ears my beauty, BUT I wanted to make sure I was heard lol... Thank u so much my sweetheart :)
Re: How I See It...
5th Apr 2014 8:18pm
Yeah, Kinda agree with Mia! The capitalization came across as shouting or somewhat angry. Maybe that was your intent. :) The message was powerful and the delivery through your flow, was impeccable! 'You be killin'em!' Xo
Pen Shine~
Pen Shine~
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re: Re: How I See It...
5th Apr 2014 9:03pm
Yup, intended lol but I promise to only whisper 'sweet nothing's' to you ok? lol thank u my dear, appreciate u always :)
Re: How I See It...
5th Apr 2014 9:28pm
re: Re: How I See It...
6th Apr 2014 1:41am
Aaaawwww my sweet angel! Too wonderful you are
but I wouldn't trade you for anything :) thank u :)
but I wouldn't trade you for anything :) thank u :)
Re: How I See It...
5th Apr 2014 11:58pm
I can feel the power streaming off the page with this write Poe great ink!!! with love Crim
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re: Re: How I See It...
6th Apr 2014 1:42am
Re: How I See It...
6th Apr 2014 1:00am
I see you started out with natural talent. Fantastic write as always. Great vent! :)
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re: Re: How I See It...
6th Apr 2014 2:51am
Well actually it's just the first PUBLIC dispmay of my work, but I been writing since I was about 6 lol
Sooooo I had a few times to try n get better lol
I thank n Appreciate u my sweet flower... :)
Sooooo I had a few times to try n get better lol
I thank n Appreciate u my sweet flower... :)
Re: How I See It...
6th Apr 2014 1:38pm
re: Re: How I See It...
6th Apr 2014 2:18pm
Aaawwww too kind bro! But no worries
I got a solid foundation with ur name on it! lol
Thanks a ton I'm grateful always for your support bro. :)
I got a solid foundation with ur name on it! lol
Thanks a ton I'm grateful always for your support bro. :)
Re: How I See It...
7th Apr 2014 5:02am
Oh I like this! Tell it like it is. Don't let anyone stand in the way of you and your words. Enjoyed reading this much :) Really admire your writing.
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7th Apr 2014 5:15am