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Rocking Horse
He sits crossed legged
supporting himself
with both arms
she kneels over his lap
kisses him roughly
teasing him with her cat eyes
as she slides down slowly
to reach full penetration
rocking back and forth
in faster motion
like riding a crazy bull
with no restraints
until they both weep
supporting himself
with both arms
she kneels over his lap
kisses him roughly
teasing him with her cat eyes
as she slides down slowly
to reach full penetration
rocking back and forth
in faster motion
like riding a crazy bull
with no restraints
until they both weep
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Re: Rocking Horse
30th Mar 2014 6:06am
'until they both weep'
Last line says it all. When the sex results in tears of joy, it can not be pornographic act, rather a spiritual expression of joy.
What child conceived from these two peoples' congress, wouldn't be proud to find this poem of testament hidden in the departed parents' attic?
As we frost bit red necks would define the profound. "Heavy Duty Dude, Heavy Duty!"
Last line says it all. When the sex results in tears of joy, it can not be pornographic act, rather a spiritual expression of joy.
What child conceived from these two peoples' congress, wouldn't be proud to find this poem of testament hidden in the departed parents' attic?
As we frost bit red necks would define the profound. "Heavy Duty Dude, Heavy Duty!"
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re: Re: Rocking Horse
4th Apr 2014 4:38am
Re: Rocking Horse
30th Mar 2014 7:20am
very erotic I love the sexual and soul release of the ending :) with love Crim
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Re: Rocking Horse
30th Mar 2014 10:03am
I have a rocking chair
and till i was unger
I sat on it
never alone
she across me
and as i rocked
she went up and down
then we rocked all day around
then we together slept
never wept
enjoyed the rocking
going on and on
till the neighbors heard
our voluminous voluptuous sound
then they also came around
for a borrowed rocking sexy ground
and replaced our
cocking and weeping....valley
so the rest you can imagine
what they found
and till i was unger
I sat on it
never alone
she across me
and as i rocked
she went up and down
then we rocked all day around
then we together slept
never wept
enjoyed the rocking
going on and on
till the neighbors heard
our voluminous voluptuous sound
then they also came around
for a borrowed rocking sexy ground
and replaced our
cocking and weeping....valley
so the rest you can imagine
what they found
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Re: Rocking Horse
30th Mar 2014 2:41pm
Re: Rocking Horse
31st Mar 2014 8:38pm
re: Re: Rocking Horse
4th Apr 2014 4:41am