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Just Lust Darling
No need to worry
over a bruised heart
that will never be
I'm a deviant cunt
who loves to fuck
takes it rough
lust is one thing
love another
I have both
you take care of
the poetic itch in me
I inject you in my veins
and my pussy convulses
while reading you
so fuck it I care
enough to read you
not enough to stick around
I've lusted after many poets
caressing my thoughts
taking me there
with an ego
I love in a man
stroking it like a cock
shoot your load
in my face
i'll lick it up
your salty taste
so pleasing to my tongue
swallowing you down
each line and verse
though when it comes
down to it nothing
but a poetic fuck
over a bruised heart
that will never be
I'm a deviant cunt
who loves to fuck
takes it rough
lust is one thing
love another
I have both
you take care of
the poetic itch in me
I inject you in my veins
and my pussy convulses
while reading you
so fuck it I care
enough to read you
not enough to stick around
I've lusted after many poets
caressing my thoughts
taking me there
with an ego
I love in a man
stroking it like a cock
shoot your load
in my face
i'll lick it up
your salty taste
so pleasing to my tongue
swallowing you down
each line and verse
though when it comes
down to it nothing
but a poetic fuck
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Re: Just Lust Darling
22nd Mar 2014 1:05am
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22nd Mar 2014 1:17am
Re: Just Lust Darling
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2014 1:28am
This is close to my heart. Great write. :)
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22nd Mar 2014 1:33am
Re: Just Lust Darling
22nd Mar 2014 1:48am
I can really relate to this!
I am particularly fond of the line
"take care of the poetic itch in me"
So many times ive tried to put that into words myself and failed. Well done :-)
I am particularly fond of the line
"take care of the poetic itch in me"
So many times ive tried to put that into words myself and failed. Well done :-)
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re: Re: Just Lust Darling
22nd Mar 2014 1:55am
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22nd Mar 2014 2:44am
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22nd Mar 2014 2:53am
yes he does :) I must be wearing see through lingerie.. thank you Poet with love Brenda
Re: Just Lust Darling
22nd Mar 2014 3:45am
What a beautifully written mind fuck...the imagery leaves not one stone unturned...what do I possible need to imagine...unbelievable excellence in adult...
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22nd Mar 2014 3:52am
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22nd Mar 2014 4:25am
Re: Just Lust Darling
22nd Mar 2014 4:11am
hEY i LOVE THE EDGE AND RHYTHYM OF THIS cRIM
Powerful indeed....
More pls ...More!
XOXO
Fire
Powerful indeed....
More pls ...More!
XOXO
Fire
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re: Re: Just Lust Darling
22nd Mar 2014 4:25am
thank you beautiful Fire you it always makes my happy when you're here :) with love Crim
Re: Just Lust Darling
22nd Mar 2014 12:32pm
"lust is one thing
love another"
so very true Brenda. once again, i bow to the truth and eroticism of your pen.
love another"
so very true Brenda. once again, i bow to the truth and eroticism of your pen.
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re: Re: Just Lust Darling
22nd Mar 2014 3:10pm
thank you for being so gracious lovely Mia when you are the true Queen of erotica :) with love Crim
Re: Just Lust Darling
22nd Mar 2014 1:00pm
"you take care of
the poetic itch in me"
wonderfully written eroticism!!
you do this so well, raw, intimate, hot!
with love and respect..xoxo domore
the poetic itch in me"
wonderfully written eroticism!!
you do this so well, raw, intimate, hot!
with love and respect..xoxo domore
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22nd Mar 2014 3:11pm
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Anonymous
22nd Mar 2014 1:31pm
ah, we bleed those needs, wants, desires effortlessly and damn sure know how to do it right, no one does it like poets :)
You hit the nail right on the head on this one Brenda, yea we kinda sorta know it, i loved reading this, you got it right girl :)
You hit the nail right on the head on this one Brenda, yea we kinda sorta know it, i loved reading this, you got it right girl :)
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22nd Mar 2014 3:12pm
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22nd Mar 2014 10:53pm
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23rd Mar 2014 00:09am
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23rd Mar 2014 7:12am
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23rd Mar 2014 2:59pm
Re: Just Lust Darling
23rd Mar 2014 11:25am
Yea, just a 'poetic fuck' I feel so used n dirty now
Lmao... Such an honest raw look into the soul
of a poet lady! Bravo
Lmao... Such an honest raw look into the soul
of a poet lady! Bravo
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23rd Mar 2014 3:00pm
Re: Just Lust Darling
23rd Mar 2014 1:20pm
Do please stick around Crimsin i promise you i can fuck u harder and better and i will always last longer and give u what u want. This is a powerful write one tht has me well u know :)
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re: Re: Just Lust Darling
23rd Mar 2014 3:01pm
AD you're great the way you are don't go changing thank you for visiting me :) with love Crim
Re: Just Lust Darling
24th Mar 2014 1:47pm
Pen down ass up
fuck the poetic ink
make it spill with lust
harder and deeper
heated words penetrated
who's mind you blowing today
Absolutely love this ink Crim, You telling secrets of poetic truths we post openly.
fuck the poetic ink
make it spill with lust
harder and deeper
heated words penetrated
who's mind you blowing today
Absolutely love this ink Crim, You telling secrets of poetic truths we post openly.
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re: Re: Just Lust Darling
24th Mar 2014 2:10pm
thank you Soul for such a gracious comment and for your poetic thoughts on this ink :) with love Crim
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24th Mar 2014 7:53pm
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Anonymous
6th Apr 2014 7:35am
Thanks for providing such a space to lust ... to enjoy someone enjoying your lust ... wonderful expression
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6th Apr 2014 5:26pm