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pieces of you
I have been free with people that are not you
Wrapping my long legs around waists of men
Allowing their warm body's to sink into mine
I have been saved by rain from a clear blue sky
Opening my arms up to the passionate pieces of you
Wrapping my long legs around waists of men
Allowing their warm body's to sink into mine
I have been saved by rain from a clear blue sky
Opening my arms up to the passionate pieces of you
Published 2nd Mar 2014
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2nd Mar 2014 9:22pm
Beautiful lust and passion of nature juxtaposed against desire.
Thrilling ...
Thrilling ...
3rd Mar 2014 00:11am
2nd Mar 2014 9:42pm
I love this piece and for some unearthly reason I don't know why. Thank you for the freedom to be me :)
3rd Mar 2014 00:13am
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3rd Mar 2014 1:05am
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3rd Mar 2014 1:22am
It's whatever you think it is Bolt, I truly appreciate you reading me and thank you for your words. :)
3rd Mar 2014 2:08am
Nice job here Tommie, last two lines are especially gem-derfull
I like this side of your writing, there's a bareness to it that exposes an almost naked you, brave and unapologetic
good stuff, shine on
I like this side of your writing, there's a bareness to it that exposes an almost naked you, brave and unapologetic
good stuff, shine on
3rd Mar 2014 2:18am
My dear CraicDealer, your words humble me. I'm very greatful to you, thank you for taking the time to read me, it means a lot ;)
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