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cake
He wants the whole cake
Sweet butterrum frosting
Mouth watering moist inside
But she's just a slice
In a circle of different flavors
Sweet butterrum frosting
Mouth watering moist inside
But she's just a slice
In a circle of different flavors
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Re: cake
1st Mar 2014 6:56pm
Tommie you are the sweet tasty cake :) while the others are just fake imitations.. with love Crim
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1st Mar 2014 10:37pm
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1st Mar 2014 8:45pm
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1st Mar 2014 10:38pm
Re: cake
1st Mar 2014 9:35pm
Could almost go together with your immediately previous poem. (Say this having tasted cupcakes today.)
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1st Mar 2014 10:39pm
Re: cake
2nd Mar 2014 00:58am
I'd like to try all please...short and sweet...pun unintentionally intended lol!
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2nd Mar 2014 7:58pm
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2nd Mar 2014 1:36am
Sweet as you like doll. Cake fixes the crappest feelings you know? You're more than one slice babe. Coz I can never stop at one piece. Too tasty. Thanks Tommie. XO
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2nd Mar 2014 8:02pm
It does fix the shittiest feelings TS, I appreciate your steamy words as always. You make me smile XO
Re: cake
His mouth waters
eyeing the sumptuous V
placed before him
a moist red velvet confection
framed by pearl white frosting
with lustful abandon
he plunges his shiny fork
penetrating dark pink layers
lifting to his eager lips
the heavenly scented piece
resting against the warm cake
a ball of vanilla ice cream melts
saturating the pink walls
all is now the harmonious color
of strawberries with cream
with reluctance he finishes
licking her plate clean
Yeah, I think one slice will do :)
eyeing the sumptuous V
placed before him
a moist red velvet confection
framed by pearl white frosting
with lustful abandon
he plunges his shiny fork
penetrating dark pink layers
lifting to his eager lips
the heavenly scented piece
resting against the warm cake
a ball of vanilla ice cream melts
saturating the pink walls
all is now the harmonious color
of strawberries with cream
with reluctance he finishes
licking her plate clean
Yeah, I think one slice will do :)
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re: Re: cake
2nd Mar 2014 8:06pm
WOW, every detail is a picture in my head.Love this GW! Thank you, I love it. :)
re: re: Re: cake
2nd Mar 2014 9:30pm
My fertile imagination takes me to some pretty exciting places sometimes :)
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2nd Mar 2014 6:55am
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2nd Mar 2014 8:07pm
Re: cake
2nd Mar 2014 7:16am
lovely! makes me want some cake, I got a muffin! that will have to do for now lol
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2nd Mar 2014 8:08pm
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2nd Mar 2014 8:09pm
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2nd Mar 2014 9:12pm
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3rd Mar 2014 6:34am
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3rd Mar 2014 1:39pm
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13th Mar 2014 6:05am