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intelligent idiuts
Picture a crew of riff raffs
With mismatched socks
Leaving the school and skip class
In the bathroom smokin pot
Fuck education...
From the alphabet to calculus
The mordern day alchemist
Stay high, hangin over balconys
Like fuck learning anything
We already got technology
True inteligence is to legit
Don't need to know how spell
All we gotta do is google it
Clock wacthin till we hear the bell
With mismatched socks
Leaving the school and skip class
In the bathroom smokin pot
Fuck education...
From the alphabet to calculus
The mordern day alchemist
Stay high, hangin over balconys
Like fuck learning anything
We already got technology
True inteligence is to legit
Don't need to know how spell
All we gotta do is google it
Clock wacthin till we hear the bell
Published 24th Feb 2014
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24th Feb 2014 4:05pm
This makes me think of my time in school.
Got the impression this takes place in the city.
The sounds of the sirens,
the tall buildings,
and the smell of bakeries.
Got the impression this takes place in the city.
The sounds of the sirens,
the tall buildings,
and the smell of bakeries.
1st Mar 2014 11:18pm
27th Feb 2014 9:09pm
Hmmm Wolfie .....
Longtime, and may I say, Nice Set of Rhymes here !!!
Indeed, the youth seem to think Google can save them, but sadly, there are a few adults in that pool too now !!!!! SMH !!!
"From the alphabet to calculus
The modern day alchemist
Stay high, hangin' over balconys"
OUTSTANDING !!!!
Sentiment and word construction, absolutely, LOVE THIS ... !!!!
However, the typos, and/or missed words, spoil it a lil' ....
Hope you are well
The V
Longtime, and may I say, Nice Set of Rhymes here !!!
Indeed, the youth seem to think Google can save them, but sadly, there are a few adults in that pool too now !!!!! SMH !!!
"From the alphabet to calculus
The modern day alchemist
Stay high, hangin' over balconys"
OUTSTANDING !!!!
Sentiment and word construction, absolutely, LOVE THIS ... !!!!
However, the typos, and/or missed words, spoil it a lil' ....
Hope you are well
The V
1st Mar 2014 11:22pm
Hey big cuz BigVirge,Thanks a lot for the compliment and anlaysis. I will get to googlin those typos and yes all is well .
