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'Faucet'
She
continuously running...
By the seconds,
the minutes, n'
the hours...
fillin' me
as I 'sink' to the depths...
My
famished
faucet
unapologetically,
D
R
A
I
N
S.
.
.
.
...
continuously running...
By the seconds,
the minutes, n'
the hours...
fillin' me
as I 'sink' to the depths...
My
famished
faucet
unapologetically,
D
R
A
I
N
S.
.
.
.
...
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Re: 'Faucet'
20th Feb 2014 4:59pm
cool concept and the flow suites it nicely... awesome writing as usual... :)
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20th Feb 2014 5:09pm
Thank you my precious! Guess the ink wasn't intense bough huh? lol appreciate you always :)
Re: 'Faucet'
20th Feb 2014 6:20pm
re: Re: 'Faucet'
20th Feb 2014 6:33pm
Thank you my dear, yea this 'vibe' is more like an extremely
far out fantasy but yea lol... I'm happy you liked though n appreciate you always :)
far out fantasy but yea lol... I'm happy you liked though n appreciate you always :)
Re: 'Faucet'
20th Feb 2014 6:32pm
Whenever I read your poems I get instant visuals. Sometimes my mind runs away I the first few words. Love your ink :)
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re: Re: 'Faucet'
20th Feb 2014 6:38pm
Aaaaawwww baby... Gosh, you got me cheering big time! lol
I thank you profusely! an hey if you need it, I have a NET u can borrow if u wanna go catch your mind! lol :)
I thank you profusely! an hey if you need it, I have a NET u can borrow if u wanna go catch your mind! lol :)
Re: 'Faucet'
21st Feb 2014 1:31am
re: Re: 'Faucet'
21st Feb 2014 3:20am
Lmao yea, except I'm the 'drip' causer lol
but yea mmmmm thank you ma'am lol
but yea mmmmm thank you ma'am lol
Re: 'Faucet'
Anonymous
21st Feb 2014 2:32am
Got to luv this clever write. Awesome!!!! :)
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re: Re: 'Faucet'
21st Feb 2014 3:21am
Re: 'Faucet'
21st Feb 2014 4:20am
On the money sunshine. Really like this. Well felt and well penned. Thank you brother.
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21st Feb 2014 2:53pm
Re: 'Faucet'
21st Feb 2014 5:28am
re: Re: 'Faucet'
21st Feb 2014 2:59pm
I can only hope it made you 'spill a lil too! lol
N btw... I'll volunteer any time to fix your drainage lol
Thank u my dear, always
N btw... I'll volunteer any time to fix your drainage lol
Thank u my dear, always
Re: 'Faucet'
22nd Feb 2014 9:41pm
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22nd Feb 2014 11:12pm
Re: 'Faucet'
7th Mar 2014 9:40pm
re: Re: 'Faucet'
7th Mar 2014 10:32pm
Aaaaawwwww thank you! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it!
Appreciate your thoughts n support my friend :)
Appreciate your thoughts n support my friend :)