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What am I.
Standing in front of these mirrors
the opposite sides of me
the dimensions within
the eternal rows of images
who am I, what am I doing here
when did I exist
where am I going to
to procreate
to replenish the human breed
to perpetuate the race
to ensure more descendent...
is that all there is to it
to flare like a bright sun
and then to die
is there a grand design
by some greater power from above
for me, one of the scurrying human
on this tired old earth...
a greater destiny
a noble ending
my name among the stars
If I flicker like a candlelight
snuffed off in the night
I want to shine out bright
and fly out into the twilight.
the opposite sides of me
the dimensions within
the eternal rows of images
who am I, what am I doing here
when did I exist
where am I going to
to procreate
to replenish the human breed
to perpetuate the race
to ensure more descendent...
is that all there is to it
to flare like a bright sun
and then to die
is there a grand design
by some greater power from above
for me, one of the scurrying human
on this tired old earth...
a greater destiny
a noble ending
my name among the stars
If I flicker like a candlelight
snuffed off in the night
I want to shine out bright
and fly out into the twilight.
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20th Feb 2014 3:38pm
Re: What am I.
20th Feb 2014 4:10pm
Wonderful Write!!!
Shine and sparkle You do Dear Grace-Here's to future fireworks!!!
Good Luck in the comp!!!
Shine and sparkle You do Dear Grace-Here's to future fireworks!!!
Good Luck in the comp!!!
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Anonymous
20th Feb 2014 5:14pm
A creative way to question our existence and the greater power. Awesome!
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Re: What am I.
21st Feb 2014 11:12am
Love this!!!
Also how you question what you are yet you still answered anyway with presumptions.
I ask myself this all too often!
Also how you question what you are yet you still answered anyway with presumptions.
I ask myself this all too often!
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21st Feb 2014 1:07pm
Indeed, there must be an answer for such questions. Thanks so much for dropping by, Divinity.
Re: What am I.
22nd Feb 2014 9:39pm
The Universe resides within us as well as outside of us. When our body dies we are still part of the Universe, just in a different form a different matter. That is my theory anyway :)
Great work Grace. All the best in the comp.
Great work Grace. All the best in the comp.
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22nd Feb 2014 10:26pm
And a good theory at that...thanks for your constant encouragement, Magdalena.:)
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