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To That Man, I Wonder...
Man, I wonder
Why is it, you tell me
intentions intended you haven’t seen…
Yet, they can tell
just by looking, what it means.
why wonder, man?
I mean, is it really time to call it quits?
This state of mine
reminds me
of pain filled times
my mind keeps
having terrible,
ever increasing fits...
I wonder…
man why can’t you take those hits?
eyes see the journey now is to figure this...
Out of reach across the broad expanse
Wonder man, why you take that chance?
His power is his heart...
it fills to the top
His weakness is his power,
bring it to a stop
They seem to always Wonder...
Man, what can’t he do?
Simple really…
I just k.i.s.s. 'that olden rule'
n' then keep it movin' too...
Confusion, and conflict
reeks, it'll ry n’ hold him down
But WonderMan,
sshhhh...he’s the baddest
brow buster-man in town!
That’s right Brotha man
these prop’s n’ shout outs
are aimed right at YOU
Still, knowing me
u likely saw it comin'
ain't that true?
*for all the guys that continue
to fight the daily struggles in life*
Why is it, you tell me
intentions intended you haven’t seen…
Yet, they can tell
just by looking, what it means.
why wonder, man?
I mean, is it really time to call it quits?
This state of mine
reminds me
of pain filled times
my mind keeps
having terrible,
ever increasing fits...
I wonder…
man why can’t you take those hits?
eyes see the journey now is to figure this...
Out of reach across the broad expanse
Wonder man, why you take that chance?
His power is his heart...
it fills to the top
His weakness is his power,
bring it to a stop
They seem to always Wonder...
Man, what can’t he do?
Simple really…
I just k.i.s.s. 'that olden rule'
n' then keep it movin' too...
Confusion, and conflict
reeks, it'll ry n’ hold him down
But WonderMan,
sshhhh...he’s the baddest
brow buster-man in town!
That’s right Brotha man
these prop’s n’ shout outs
are aimed right at YOU
Still, knowing me
u likely saw it comin'
ain't that true?
*for all the guys that continue
to fight the daily struggles in life*
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18th Feb 2014 5:11pm
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18th Feb 2014 6:51pm
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18th Feb 2014 8:13pm
Aaaawwww thank you my sweet Gypsy!
so grateful for your unwavering support always :)
so grateful for your unwavering support always :)
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18th Feb 2014 7:07pm
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18th Feb 2014 8:19pm
Aaaawwww Mami, you are an angel... Thank you!
Truly adore your sweetness n support always :)
Truly adore your sweetness n support always :)
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18th Feb 2014 9:16pm
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18th Feb 2014 9:41pm
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19th Feb 2014 11:51am
Yup yup, I shall try bro! glad you enjoyed
n appreciate your support always! :)
n appreciate your support always! :)
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20th Feb 2014 00:58am
Poe keep the faith and keep fighting the good fight.. great inking :) much love Brenda
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20th Feb 2014 3:08am
I shall try my dear, I shall try... Thank you for your sweetness n support :)
Re: To That Man, I Wonder...
21st Feb 2014 2:51am
Great piece Bro. Poe!!!
I enjoy your writes man!!!
Awesome read!!
Sir Lancelott
I enjoy your writes man!!!
Awesome read!!
Sir Lancelott
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21st Feb 2014 4:11am
Thank you bro! I'm truly honored to have your support n kind words always bro... :)