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"Seep...talking out both sides of the Mouth..."
If you keep telling me
to please, kiss you there
baby I will...
When you'd keep letting me
go, yet want me
to hold you close
ooohh Damn, baby chill
See, these compliant feelings
are kind of hard to explain
coaxing incessant desires
shit, it's driving me insane...
If you keep saying
oh lover, I'm not so hungry for your fire
Yet simultaneously telling me
your craving me takes you higher...
Baby, oh darling, my God
hold me close, and please don’t let go
because I can’t resist your love,
or how your body flows
molding into the curves of my structure
yes, I need you right here
you’ve tempted my desires
so now I’m begging to be near...
your presence, your touch,
your soft kisses on my neck
how you cause me to tremble
as you begin to seductively peck...
fragrant, tender skin
that’s so sweet to thy lips
I’m so begging you to love me
falling, my heart begins to trip...
and I’m taken on a roller coaster
of emotions that throw me
and twist me, as you hold me in your holster
Pulling the trigger you take aim
you know I’m yours,
hold me close to your frame
come on now baby can’t you see
that just cause you ask me,
I don’t really want to be free...
and all I'm asking
is that, you just love me...
to please, kiss you there
baby I will...
When you'd keep letting me
go, yet want me
to hold you close
ooohh Damn, baby chill
See, these compliant feelings
are kind of hard to explain
coaxing incessant desires
shit, it's driving me insane...
If you keep saying
oh lover, I'm not so hungry for your fire
Yet simultaneously telling me
your craving me takes you higher...
Baby, oh darling, my God
hold me close, and please don’t let go
because I can’t resist your love,
or how your body flows
molding into the curves of my structure
yes, I need you right here
you’ve tempted my desires
so now I’m begging to be near...
your presence, your touch,
your soft kisses on my neck
how you cause me to tremble
as you begin to seductively peck...
fragrant, tender skin
that’s so sweet to thy lips
I’m so begging you to love me
falling, my heart begins to trip...
and I’m taken on a roller coaster
of emotions that throw me
and twist me, as you hold me in your holster
Pulling the trigger you take aim
you know I’m yours,
hold me close to your frame
come on now baby can’t you see
that just cause you ask me,
I don’t really want to be free...
and all I'm asking
is that, you just love me...
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Re: "Seep...talking out both sides of the Mouth..."
17th Feb 2014 2:14pm
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17th Feb 2014 2:16pm
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Anonymous
17th Feb 2014 2:25pm
Oh my heart is trippin too.
i aint lying here when i say you are one versatile writer, this is hot and sensual and yet next you write can be a 180* different..always exciting.
Excellent write PIKM, very nice!
i aint lying here when i say you are one versatile writer, this is hot and sensual and yet next you write can be a 180* different..always exciting.
Excellent write PIKM, very nice!
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re: Re: "Seep...talking out both sides of the Mouth..."
17th Feb 2014 3:14pm
Aaaaawwww thank you! I'm so super flattered
by your sweet sweet praise :)... Grateful always for your support :)
by your sweet sweet praise :)... Grateful always for your support :)
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17th Feb 2014 2:33pm
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17th Feb 2014 6:59pm
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17th Feb 2014 5:19pm
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17th Feb 2014 7:00pm
Lol yea I guess so... N you're super sweet always my sweetheart :) thank you, I'm grateful always :)
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Anonymous
17th Feb 2014 5:26pm
Um......this is stunning. Enjoyed this awesome write much. :)
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17th Feb 2014 7:03pm
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17th Feb 2014 8:01pm
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17th Feb 2014 8:14pm
*coughing* oops sorry I was 'choking'
from that smoke lol thank you my dear
Appreciate u :)
from that smoke lol thank you my dear
Appreciate u :)
Re: "Seep...talking out both sides of the Mouth..."
17th Feb 2014 11:14pm
"you've tempted my desires" sticks out to me. It's just so fitting. This entire piece is very... Stirring. I like it :)
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re: Re: "Seep...talking out both sides of the Mouth..."
17th Feb 2014 11:18pm
Why thank you sweetheart, I'm happy you liked this n appreciate your time n thoughts on this ink...
Oh n ur continued support! :)
Oh n ur continued support! :)
Re: "Seep...talking out both sides of the Mouth..."
18th Feb 2014 10:54am
Is that a gun in your pocket, Mr Poe'? One thing, could you not call me babe around the guys? I'm just sayin'...lol.
Fan of your work brother Poe'. Great ink. Thanks for that.
Fan of your work brother Poe'. Great ink. Thanks for that.
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re: Re: "Seep...talking out both sides of the Mouth..."
18th Feb 2014 3:24pm
A gun!? Nah I'm just happy to see ya bro!
lmao... Hey great to hear from you bro n with the humor intact? That's a bonus for sure! Thanks a ton
I appreciate ya n yea I'm a fan of you too bro!
lmao... Hey great to hear from you bro n with the humor intact? That's a bonus for sure! Thanks a ton
I appreciate ya n yea I'm a fan of you too bro!
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21st Feb 2014 3:42am
Not done by a long shot brother. A mere dip in the road my friend. All power Sir Poe'.
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Re: "Seep...talking out both sides of the Mouth..."
18th Feb 2014 2:08pm
"because I can’t resist your love,
or how your body flows
molding into the curves of my
structure"
one day the ladies are gonna be beating each other away with sticks Poe lol steller ink, as always.
or how your body flows
molding into the curves of my
structure"
one day the ladies are gonna be beating each other away with sticks Poe lol steller ink, as always.
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re: Re: "Seep...talking out both sides of the Mouth..."
18th Feb 2014 3:29pm
Oh really? Well I wish hurry the hell up
I'm not getting any younger! Lmao
Truly thank u my dear, grateful as always mami :)
I'm not getting any younger! Lmao
Truly thank u my dear, grateful as always mami :)
Re: "Seep...talking out both sides of the Mouth..."
Anonymous
18th Feb 2014 4:24pm
Lovely work, Poetik
So very passionate with a serving of hesitation and anticipation..a taking charge while surrendering
a lot in this one
clever and nice flow
well done :-) thank's for the read
So very passionate with a serving of hesitation and anticipation..a taking charge while surrendering
a lot in this one
clever and nice flow
well done :-) thank's for the read
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18th Feb 2014 4:45pm
Thank you my precious moondancing
wonder! :) I so appreciate you to the very utmost...:)
wonder! :) I so appreciate you to the very utmost...:)
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18th Feb 2014 5:06pm
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18th Feb 2014 5:44pm
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21st Feb 2014 7:59am
Very beautiful write! I was swept away on a sensual love trip with this one...and I enjoyed every word!
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21st Feb 2014 3:21pm
Wow I'm happy to hear you were swept away... It's a sweet compliment! Thank you so much LP... I'm grateful for your time n thoughts on my ink :)