My fucked up mind

You expressed a vicious ride many of us can't seem get off in a stark cold descriptive way ... Well done!

Writer's note: line 1 should be "too" -line 9 should be "And"

Indeed. It's always a case of "heart versus head". Some people are like a drug. We know they're bad for us and yet we end up with them again. But I assure you, it's not always us that's to blame. Excellent work!

It is so painful when your heart is stronger than your will

When you have more self-worth,it will stop...

The same comment i gave someone else
you have to ride out the storms
before you can bathe in the warmth
somethings are worth waiting for
i learnt that myself awhile ago
i still find it hard
but i know the outcome could be wonderful

well done
very relatable indeed

Sad write...feeling it. :)

who's mind isn't, at times, a terrible place to be?

you recognize the pattern

amending it now becomes the difficult task

i have faith it can be done

I feel you. our minds are hard things to control. Everything feels like our fault. when the universe throws us a curve ball we get hard on ourselves. we forget that the people we try to be perfect for aren't perfect themselves. if you were perfect youd be hated for it anyway. We build these expectations for ourselves and feel worthless when we let ourselves down. i feel you. but this is all about growing and learning.

o no

Good poem, i like the use of semi-repetition.

Love it.