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Who's That Peeking In Your Window?
The window to your soul was locked
so I rubbed some dirt off the glass and peeked in
what a fucking mess
I thought about breaking in
cleaning up a bit but then I was like
no fucking way
that's your soul
why should I clean it,
all that bad mojo floating around in there
I can just see myself catching bad karma
and all types of other diseases of the mad mind
I mean black walls of the soul!? yikes
that's not paint it's miasma
dim, the light of your sixth chakra does not shine
I back up and get the hell out of dodge
sometimes it's better to leave dirty windows, dirty.
so I rubbed some dirt off the glass and peeked in
what a fucking mess
I thought about breaking in
cleaning up a bit but then I was like
no fucking way
that's your soul
why should I clean it,
all that bad mojo floating around in there
I can just see myself catching bad karma
and all types of other diseases of the mad mind
I mean black walls of the soul!? yikes
that's not paint it's miasma
dim, the light of your sixth chakra does not shine
I back up and get the hell out of dodge
sometimes it's better to leave dirty windows, dirty.
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Re: Who's That Peeking In Your Window?
8th Feb 2014 2:13am
break into my fn house you'll get mad dirty in the process....jus sayin nikki..........
if you do tho take my 6 chakras out that are in the can.i'm lazy and they stink.........
if you do tho take my 6 chakras out that are in the can.i'm lazy and they stink.........
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re: Re: Who's That Peeking In Your Window?
8th Feb 2014 2:17am
Re: Who's That Peeking In Your Window?
Anonymous
8th Feb 2014 3:24am
Risks of Voyeurism.......protect yourself!!!! Bravo! Mike

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re: Re: Who's That Peeking In Your Window?
8th Feb 2014 3:46am
Re: Who's That Peeking In Your Window?
8th Feb 2014 3:59am
re: Re: Who's That Peeking In Your Window?
8th Feb 2014 4:15am
Re: Who's That Peeking In Your Window?
8th Feb 2014 5:47am
VERY interesting... I have recently heard of a theory that each person should be careful of who they allow into their 'house'.
It is tempting to tidy up another's mess, but who is rearranging furniture in one's own house? Who is allowed that privilege?
Deceptively insightful write, nikki...
It is tempting to tidy up another's mess, but who is rearranging furniture in one's own house? Who is allowed that privilege?
Deceptively insightful write, nikki...
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re: Re: Who's That Peeking In Your Window?
8th Feb 2014 7:12am
resentment follows after the spring cleaning, getting rid of things someone held dear, no matter how dark, is up to them, not me or you....
thank you Atakti
thank you Atakti
Re: Who's That Peeking In Your Window?
8th Feb 2014 2:17pm
re: Re: Who's That Peeking In Your Window?
9th Feb 2014 2:57am
Re: Who's That Peeking In Your Window?
Anonymous
8th Feb 2014 4:01pm
That pull to fix the broken.. wth is that? Run Nikki! Infectious shit lives within.
Enjoyed this one. Was like finally watching *that chick* (you know the one) pull her face out of the window before something sinister pulled her through it. Brilliant!
Enjoyed this one. Was like finally watching *that chick* (you know the one) pull her face out of the window before something sinister pulled her through it. Brilliant!

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re: Re: Who's That Peeking In Your Window?
9th Feb 2014 2:58am
Re: Who's That Peeking In Your Window?
9th Feb 2014 00:57am
A nice twist on the usual theme of the menace being the one breaking in. Instead the danger lurks within. "The window of your soul was my favourite bit".
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re: Re: Who's That Peeking In Your Window?
9th Feb 2014 3:06am
Re: Who's That Peeking In Your Window?
12th Feb 2014 11:04am
"catching bad karma
and all types of other diseases..."
Waiting down at the Mandir to get tested for KTD is a bitch.
So many cool lines, Nikki. I really enjoyed the humour, inventiveness and clever insights.
and all types of other diseases..."
Waiting down at the Mandir to get tested for KTD is a bitch.
So many cool lines, Nikki. I really enjoyed the humour, inventiveness and clever insights.
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