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Just goofing
The women of today
don't know their worth
they walk around half naked
attracting the suits and ties
with their crimson red lips
tainted with lies
their pocketbooks light
it's feenin for it's fix
someone buy these bitches another mix
it's sad to me
when a lady must stoop so low
the daddy syndrome kicking their ass
them thinking nobody knows
it's written across their ancient face
so many years have passed
give daddy a break
or women up
it's all on you to make a change
destroy the pictures
if you must
break the frame
erase the tattoo you've inked across your heart
or
put on some clothes and get a fresh start
( I'll be playing around with this one a bit)
don't know their worth
they walk around half naked
attracting the suits and ties
with their crimson red lips
tainted with lies
their pocketbooks light
it's feenin for it's fix
someone buy these bitches another mix
it's sad to me
when a lady must stoop so low
the daddy syndrome kicking their ass
them thinking nobody knows
it's written across their ancient face
so many years have passed
give daddy a break
or women up
it's all on you to make a change
destroy the pictures
if you must
break the frame
erase the tattoo you've inked across your heart
or
put on some clothes and get a fresh start
( I'll be playing around with this one a bit)
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Re: Just goofing
7th Feb 2014 7:10pm
Nice write let it be! Yes my lady there is too much of that in today’s society. My dad’s a preacher or a perv so let me dress like a whore to get back at him. Sometimes life is just shit, but sometimes ya have to man/woman up and say I’m going to make a change.
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re: Re: Just goofing
7th Feb 2014 8:32pm
Yeah I see that a lot around my parts it's a bit annoying and Ty for the stop in xox
Re: Just goofing
7th Feb 2014 7:21pm
I like it!
It addresses a hot topic. The ideas and definitions of women swirl around the media, and it seems only certain formulas stick in the world's conscience. Women have just as much responsibility as the men, to portray women in a positive and healthy light.
Nicely tackled, Gigi.
:)
It addresses a hot topic. The ideas and definitions of women swirl around the media, and it seems only certain formulas stick in the world's conscience. Women have just as much responsibility as the men, to portray women in a positive and healthy light.
Nicely tackled, Gigi.
:)
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re: Re: Just goofing
7th Feb 2014 8:33pm
Re: Just goofing
GIRL power!!!!!!
most people don't realize but pussy runs the fn world..........yall spread that word,the power you really got, and dudes are dominated....
most people don't realize but pussy runs the fn world..........yall spread that word,the power you really got, and dudes are dominated....
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re: Re: Just goofing
8th Feb 2014 00:04am
Re: Just goofing
8th Feb 2014 6:38am
good to see you back Gigi, totally agree wit Atakti
check brake for break there in the last two stanzas.
good stuff Miss, shine on
check brake for break there in the last two stanzas.
good stuff Miss, shine on
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Re: Just goofing
8th Feb 2014 8:56am
Nice one Gigi :) Serious and honest, with a few quirk of humour.
Thanks for the read.
Peace, Indie
Thanks for the read.
Peace, Indie
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re: Re: Just goofing
8th Feb 2014 4:39pm
Re: Just goofing
10th Feb 2014 2:42am
Great write Lady!!!!
Keepin' it 100 with a lil humor!!
Awesome read!!
Sir Lancelott
Keepin' it 100 with a lil humor!!
Awesome read!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Just goofing
15th Feb 2014 1:55am
Re: Just goofing
13th Feb 2014 6:06am
Great write...
It reminded me of one of my favorite Dave Chapelle Bits...Google his name and the word uniform if you don't know what I'm talking about.It's nothing graphic or anything...
Enjoyed...
It reminded me of one of my favorite Dave Chapelle Bits...Google his name and the word uniform if you don't know what I'm talking about.It's nothing graphic or anything...
Enjoyed...
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re: Re: Just goofing
15th Feb 2014 2:51am
Re: Just goofing
20th Feb 2014 00:54am
so true. nice too se a woman with talent and respect for herself. Bravo! :)
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