Afterwards ...

Short and very sweet

I love your poems

Well, THAT I can return, Speak, I love your poems, too! Thank you so much for your sweet comment!  
My first idea on the third line was quite similar but far too sexually orientated for the love category. So I opted for the current line :-(. Too shy, I guess :-).

hollow but deep
dry but
well perfumed
u don't read mine
a shy gal  only gives
the best entry
silently
but surely

Thank you, again! I'm not sure about the silent entry but sure about the surely :-).

just  for the fun of it

Hope you had fun :-). Thank you for your kind comment, again!

hollow skin...
a powerful picture, Chi..:)

Thank you Paul,
when the memories are strong ...

yes, i understand....ox

And that means so much, JeJe :-). Thank you, soulmate. xo

Deep! u have def. Made me like haikus lady :)

This is something of which I'm really glad! Your sharing the love for haiku means so much to me, Poe! Thank you for that thrilling comment!

the sorrow of parting, so well expressed. the tear that burns, till he returns...

Yes, glad you can relate somehow, at least I'm glad you understand. Thank you, John, for your lovely words!

I've been reading more and more Chiyo-ni ... You represent the art form beautifully Miss Chi ... great piece!

Your compliment makes me blush since I got to know you as a haiku master of the finest. Thank you so much, LSP! Your comment makes me happy!

Question: Why the (well, not only) dative/direction indicating particle 'ni' with Chiyo? Can't find my Japanese grammar book :-(.

Ever since you posed this question I've been searching for the explanation for my edification as well ... And still haven't found out why : (

I just finished a short volume of haiku by David Cobb, and it mentions she was known as Chiyo-ni and Chiyo-jo as well.

She is mentioned as Chiyo-ni and Kaga no Chiyo, too.
I'm still investigating ... Thanks for your response. Tell me, please, when/if you find an explanation!

Ouch this has so much pain for being such a small little package. Beautiful write as always. Thanks for sharing.  

And it weighs so much, J.. Turns into a black hole, all-consuming. Thank you for your kind and understanding words!

You have a way with words! :)

I love to work with words. It's part of my job but it's rather Spanish than English I work with. Glad you like it, Sara!

Short and sweet poems are so much like poetry refreshers after so many long pieces.

Haha! Thank you, that's exactly my standpoint. I don't like to bother others with epic pieces ... mostly not.