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Invisible
These cracks in the floor trap me
As the walls close in on me
And the screaming
It gets louder
There's no connection anymore
Voices carry through me
Any memory of me has faded
I'm invisible
As the walls close in on me
And the screaming
It gets louder
There's no connection anymore
Voices carry through me
Any memory of me has faded
I'm invisible
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Re: Invisible
23rd Jan 2014 5:04pm
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23rd Jan 2014 8:16pm
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Re: Invisible
23rd Jan 2014 9:38pm
This gave me a claustrophobic feeling... not entirely sure why... I loved the read... :)
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24th Jan 2014 1:35am
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24th Jan 2014 1:54am
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24th Jan 2014 2:21am
OMG Tommie I felt like you were channeling me in this one. I feel like I could have wrote this but you beat me to it!
Such a voice...different from the other ones I've read...and yet I know it's you.
Such a voice...different from the other ones I've read...and yet I know it's you.
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re: Re: Invisible
24th Jan 2014 2:24am
It's a feeling I feel often!I appreciate you reading and feeling it.Thank you Jswiss.
Re: Invisible
24th Jan 2014 3:20am
Even heavier a feeling when you feel alone. Just remember you're not alone, yeah? Pain in this share bub. Thank you. XO
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24th Jan 2014 3:25am
Re: Invisible
24th Jan 2014 2:19pm
Oh no not my sweet Tommie! You are too much of a presence to EVER be invisible!! So I hope u don't truly subscribe to that feeling sweetheart. Emotionally strong ink lady
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26th Jan 2014 00:34am
Re: Invisible
26th Jan 2014 00:32am
An abandon home
window to thy soul boarded up
memories sealed
no one can see you
i see why your invisible
wow deep dark and beautiful
window to thy soul boarded up
memories sealed
no one can see you
i see why your invisible
wow deep dark and beautiful
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26th Jan 2014 00:36am