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Tomb of Aquarius
In the presence of darkness,
Trapped deep in abyss..
In the tomb of Aquarius,
No direction I missed..
Stay calm and be still,
Feel vibrations of love..
You'll soon find your guide,
Piercing light from above..
Published 8th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
8th Jan 2014 3:39am
Very pretty! I love poems that I can pretty much sing to. They just are so pretty!
8th Jan 2014 3:53am
These are my favorites when they happen. I call them trinkets of silence. Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy them too.
8th Jan 2014 3:53am
8th Jan 2014 4:00am
Succinct and concise. So much contained in so little, like the endless beauty of a diamond, or the simple world viewed from afar. I desire to learn the craft of the trinket maker.
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9th Jan 2014 2:41am
Very beautiful trinket!
I love the stanza :
"Stay calm and be still,
"Feel vibrations of love..
in opposition to the first :
"In the presence of darkness,
"Trapped deep in abyss..
And I love to discover the metering structure of the poem : 7/6 7/6 5/6 5/6
It is a very musical write! Wonderful poem!
I love the stanza :
"Stay calm and be still,
"Feel vibrations of love..
in opposition to the first :
"In the presence of darkness,
"Trapped deep in abyss..
And I love to discover the metering structure of the poem : 7/6 7/6 5/6 5/6
It is a very musical write! Wonderful poem!
