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Erotic senryu
When I undressed
Wild and strong masturbating
You came in your jeans
Wild and strong masturbating
You came in your jeans
Published 30th Dec 2013
| Edited 26th Mar 2015
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30th Dec 2013 8:08am
Nice senryu, Gabi (Senryu is for human feeling, Haiku is for nature). Nice and very hot one! I love it...
31st Dec 2013 2:01am
Thank you malin!:)To make difference between haiku and senryu,here is something to read for everyone http://startag.tripod.com/HkSenDiff.html
31st Dec 2013 6:05am
haiku or senryu, your text is very nice and I love it! Sorry for that stupid comment of technic where the poetry is the main aim of this text!!! ♥ ♥ ♥
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1st Jan 2014 10:11am
ah, it's been a while since you posted and well worth the wait for this delightful vignette.
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5th Feb 2014 4:10pm
Like this a lot
I wrote a similar poem several days ago entitled "Sex Logic"
We are on the same plane. My Grandparents were from Romania ....
I wrote a similar poem several days ago entitled "Sex Logic"
We are on the same plane. My Grandparents were from Romania ....
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