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Goth Girl
Her long black hair
A dark veil over her pale white skin.
Her painted black lips
A warning, an invitation to taste what's within.
Her silver piercings on her lips
So inticing, come close she's in the mood for biting.
Spiked heels and black fishnet stalkings
She turns heads but she keeps walking.
The moon shimmering on her
She's in her glory, a dark queen,
A goddess she is
She keeps walking.
Seeking her dark lord
Soon in his embrace she will be.
His caresses so sweet, his kisses so deep
Could only come from one, her dark goth love.
A dark veil over her pale white skin.
Her painted black lips
A warning, an invitation to taste what's within.
Her silver piercings on her lips
So inticing, come close she's in the mood for biting.
Spiked heels and black fishnet stalkings
She turns heads but she keeps walking.
The moon shimmering on her
She's in her glory, a dark queen,
A goddess she is
She keeps walking.
Seeking her dark lord
Soon in his embrace she will be.
His caresses so sweet, his kisses so deep
Could only come from one, her dark goth love.
Published 6th Feb 2011
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14th Feb 2011 1:31pm
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14th Feb 2011 6:10pm
15th Feb 2011 7:15am
I really liked it, but in my humble opinion, it was too short. That is to say, you got me into it, and left me hanging and wanting more of your mental imagery as I crave those particular snippets of darkness that spill forth from the darkness of the minds eye to the uncomfortable harsh brightness that is life. I do so like the direction though, nice job
11th Nov 2012 5:21am
Leaving u hanging may have possibly been the point in which thy suspense lys
15th Feb 2011 7:18am
Thank you your right I should have gone into more detail..with this one..thank you for the suggestions..and comments..peace Crimsn
24th Mar 2011 3:27pm
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18th May 2013 00:24am
I'm going to be honest here... I'm a sucker for Gothic poetry and this is nice. I like it.
18th May 2013 7:18pm
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17th Oct 2013 11:20pm
I was drawn to this poem as soon as I saw its title, and knew I had to read it. The gothique perspective and style is something that I absolutely adore.
"Seeking her dark lord
Soon in his embrace she shall be"
That line is so sweet. I love it! ^^
A very nice write!
"Seeking her dark lord
Soon in his embrace she shall be"
That line is so sweet. I love it! ^^
A very nice write!
17th Oct 2013 11:20pm
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17th Oct 2013 11:27pm
Dripping black on pale moonlit flames. Goth gals have that irresistible way about them. You paint a scene well. She catches my eye as she slithers by. Great piece, crimsin.
17th Oct 2013 11:32pm
4th Sep 2015 1:44pm
It's always interesting to me to see tweeners and teens experimenting with Goth; a few months later most are back in their overpriced Nikes and Old Navy wares ... You've painted a picture of confident woman who embraces her identify and the power it brings as she turns heads. Ultra cool ink!
4th Sep 2015 3:36pm
yeah it's usually a phase I love the goth culture but really I'm not a true goth :)
thank you for enjoying this write..
with love and respect Crimsin
thank you for enjoying this write..
with love and respect Crimsin
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9th Sep 2018 6:38pm
It like one who writes it creates, one the creates becomes master of what it creates, ur writer iam just a scrambler..
9th Sep 2018 6:41pm
no dearest Augustomni you are a deep thinker with a voice all your own...
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
24th Feb 2019 11:14pm
