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'Rough Sex'
So you say you want it a lil rough?
How you want me to grab you
Choke you to the edge of death
til your bulging eyes say, enough
It'll make you happy if I got
slap happy, n' then with closed fist
swelling pink lips,
a fist in your wet hole,
yank your hair fiercely outta control...
Just to make you cream
Splash hot wax
on your bald pussycat
Bash my hard cock deep in the back
Bend you in insane positions
Fuck you with a fevered pitch
swearing at you, feeding pain
causing incisions in your darkest parts...
being brutal in this carnal
art... Tie your legs to the bedpost
Spitting cock juice in your face
is what you're begging for the most
Using all manners of clamps
n' pulleys to slowly torture
your nipples endurance
my each n' every way to hurt
will be your wish's come uppance
But before I do any of this...
please turn off that damn camera!
because if something goes tragically wrong...
I ain't trying to leave any evidence!!
Lmao
*FYI, this is not intended to make fun of this lifestyle
Or ANYONE, just my stupid lil mind thinking
What if I did this n in all the craziness I accidentally
killed my love? It wouldn't be pretty I imagine! So
I thought I'd do a DARK humor piece* :)
How you want me to grab you
Choke you to the edge of death
til your bulging eyes say, enough
It'll make you happy if I got
slap happy, n' then with closed fist
swelling pink lips,
a fist in your wet hole,
yank your hair fiercely outta control...
Just to make you cream
Splash hot wax
on your bald pussycat
Bash my hard cock deep in the back
Bend you in insane positions
Fuck you with a fevered pitch
swearing at you, feeding pain
causing incisions in your darkest parts...
being brutal in this carnal
art... Tie your legs to the bedpost
Spitting cock juice in your face
is what you're begging for the most
Using all manners of clamps
n' pulleys to slowly torture
your nipples endurance
my each n' every way to hurt
will be your wish's come uppance
But before I do any of this...
please turn off that damn camera!
because if something goes tragically wrong...
I ain't trying to leave any evidence!!
Lmao
*FYI, this is not intended to make fun of this lifestyle
Or ANYONE, just my stupid lil mind thinking
What if I did this n in all the craziness I accidentally
killed my love? It wouldn't be pretty I imagine! So
I thought I'd do a DARK humor piece* :)
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9th Dec 2013 8:12pm
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9th Dec 2013 8:28pm
Lol okie I'll try! lol
Thank you sweetie, happy you liked this n appreciate ur support :)
Thank you sweetie, happy you liked this n appreciate ur support :)
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9th Dec 2013 8:14pm
Poe this is fucking hot!!! made me all creamy inside just thinking about it ;) much love Crim
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9th Dec 2013 8:30pm
Mmmmmm wowzers lol happy you uhm CAME... To err visit lol
appreciate ya lady :)
appreciate ya lady :)
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9th Dec 2013 8:21pm
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9th Dec 2013 8:31pm
Yea the whole piece was just the setup for the silly thought I had lol...thank u so much my sweet one :)
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10th Dec 2013 00:23am
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9th Dec 2013 9:54pm
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10th Dec 2013 00:24am
Hey bro. Yea I guess it is an eyebrow raiser lol
But hey someone had to do it right? Lol
Appreciate your support as always
But hey someone had to do it right? Lol
Appreciate your support as always
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Anonymous
9th Dec 2013 9:57pm
Aha...nutballs for Christmas. Who needs rum when you have cu-uh-mmm...? oh never mind...lol.
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10th Dec 2013 3:58am
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9th Dec 2013 11:08pm
My friend this was twisted but your point at the ends understood. I mean a lot of men and women engage in rough sex, but what if during the roughness you accidentally killed or got killed during the sex. How in the hell would or could you explain it? Magnificent piece!
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10th Dec 2013 00:26am
Lol exactly my point bro! If be kinda hard to convince slit of people that a 'smashed' jaw, or ligature marks around the throat was all in the name of fun n busting a nut! lol thanks kid, appreciate you! :)
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10th Dec 2013 5:46am
^^^^ what Brenda said lol
day'um Papi, loved this, even the very dark humour xo
day'um Papi, loved this, even the very dark humour xo
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10th Dec 2013 11:56am
Lol aaaawwww thank you my dear!
Truly appreciate your sweet comment n your support always! :)
Truly appreciate your sweet comment n your support always! :)
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10th Dec 2013 2:37pm
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10th Dec 2013 3:16pm
Thank you sweet Rain, happy to know it didn't
cause you to want the 'light' lol appreciate u muchly :)
cause you to want the 'light' lol appreciate u muchly :)
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Anonymous
10th Dec 2013 10:09pm
Hot damn! Intense and well written
Potent and direct with an authoratarian air...nice job! Peace n love
Potent and direct with an authoratarian air...nice job! Peace n love
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10th Dec 2013 10:31pm
Hot damn I love your comment! lol
Truly my sweetness I appreciate u n all your support always :)
Truly my sweetness I appreciate u n all your support always :)
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11th Dec 2013 3:24am
Wow... That's wonderful! lol thank u I appreciate the enthused reply n the smile u gave me :)
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Anonymous
11th Dec 2013 3:24am
Mmmmmmm! You talked me into the roughy stuff. Enjoyed the sexiness and the laugh. LOL!!!! :)
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11th Dec 2013 3:53am
Lol I did huh? Ok turn around n bend over, I'm gonna spank ur ass! lol thank u sweetie appreciate u :)
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Anonymous
11th Dec 2013 4:26am
Ooooooo! Bent over and ready.......spank away. LOL!!!!! :)
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11th Dec 2013 4:34am
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Anonymous
11th Dec 2013 5:03am
Thank you......can I have another? LMAO!!!! :)
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11th Dec 2013 12:32pm
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Anonymous
12th Dec 2013 4:29am
Thank you! Just a little harder next time. LMAO!!!!!! :)
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12th Dec 2013 5:26am
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Anonymous
11th Dec 2013 7:15am
haha, i love your dark humor, the last part was perfect!!!
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11th Dec 2013 12:37pm
Aaaawwww thank you! You know humor I've been told is a great talent I have! yup sure do my crazy lil voices
say it to me all the time! lol... thank you my dear, I'm pleased you enjoyed this lil piece :) appreciate you so much lady :)
say it to me all the time! lol... thank you my dear, I'm pleased you enjoyed this lil piece :) appreciate you so much lady :)
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15th Dec 2013 11:06pm
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16th Dec 2013 2:38am
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24th Dec 2013 7:51pm
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25th Dec 2013 4:57am
Your're very, very, very smart. I feel sorry for your enemies. Sex sells, everything. Much respect thrown your way, will you throw it back? Don't worry not everyone has arms to catch, some pretend they swim, they do swim with fins...
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25th Dec 2013 10:28am
Lmao gosh you have me blushing n laughing
Will I throw respect back? Hell yea, it's simple too
I respect any n all who respect me, add to that I love a
gifted writer n you my dear are GIFTED so no worries
you have mine! ;)... As for SEX selling? I know, but I'm not just bout that by any stretch of the imagination... :)
Thank you for your thoughts sweetness :)
Will I throw respect back? Hell yea, it's simple too
I respect any n all who respect me, add to that I love a
gifted writer n you my dear are GIFTED so no worries
you have mine! ;)... As for SEX selling? I know, but I'm not just bout that by any stretch of the imagination... :)
Thank you for your thoughts sweetness :)
Re: 'Rough Sex'
7th Jan 2014 1:12am
thank god i ain't no woman
or i would have been fucked
none-the -less
lovely solid fucking
or i would have been fucked
none-the -less
lovely solid fucking
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7th Jan 2014 2:23am
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7th Jan 2014 3:33pm
u must be a savage fucker
all gals must be lined up
for a turn once with you
to know what savage fuckers
can fucking well do
all gals must be lined up
for a turn once with you
to know what savage fuckers
can fucking well do
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