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Re: glassy eyed...
8th Dec 2013 1:30am
Re: glassy eyed...
8th Dec 2013 1:53am
Re: glassy eyed...
8th Dec 2013 3:25am
no, it doesn't need a continuation, though a continuation may be nice. however, it does speak volumes on its own. this could be any window full of things which disturb someone.
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Re: glassy eyed...
8th Dec 2013 12:02pm
Re: glassy eyed...
8th Dec 2013 1:25pm
Your double entendre poems are so brilliant.
I love them!
What else can I say but
more! more! more?
I love them!
What else can I say but
more! more! more?
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Re: glassy eyed...
8th Dec 2013 11:12pm
A continuation, maybe...but definitely want to read more and more! Keep up the great work.
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Re: glassy eyed...
12th Dec 2013 7:14am
I would want a continuation,
but I don't wanna ruin it's
mystery.
Great Work!!
Darker
but I don't wanna ruin it's
mystery.
Great Work!!
Darker
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