acceptance...

Don't know about this one bro...for some reason I just can't say I like it(peace brother)

that's ok, Hash, thanks
for reading, appreciate
it..:)

The reason I say that brother is because i feel a deep hurt in you and I just can not like that :)

I guess we're all
damaged goods...

thank you, my
friend..:)
 

yes ,damaged...but good :)

don't have to know it, lick it, nor like it,
[but
for
the falsity of OUR huge dualist mindcraptrap]....

that said, let's place a comma after 'wanted',
& let be as a begone bygone

"....let's call the whole thing off..."--(an
unlikely likeability )

hell, I don't like it myself,
that's why I  mentioned
it
is
what
it
is...

nor could I brother :/

Guess I can't blame you..:)

we can accept but we dont have to like...:)

acceptance is enough,
I think..:)

Brilliantly done
but hopefully not the case.

Thanks, Chi...
I tend towards the view
that every feeling has
been felt at one time
or another and thankfully
this was of a past time..:)

Well I liked it,and have lived it.I think hashman has too =p

I lived this once and
it's in the past but
the feeling lasts...
thanks, Fen...

I don't know, paul, I think this might
be one of your better poems. It is honest
and expresses something we have all endured
and can instantly relate to. Ten words
to sum up a lifetime of agonising weeks, months,
or even years...

Very sad piece.

"For what can a heart
plead"

I love it!


Darker