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planet: EARTH
rotting decay
thats all the world is today
nobody is kind or true
and this is what makes me blue
we are all dead on the inside
and nobody is willing to change
thats all the world is today
nobody is kind or true
and this is what makes me blue
we are all dead on the inside
and nobody is willing to change
Published 3rd Feb 2011
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Anonymous
3rd Feb 2011 6:07am
"And this is what makes me blue"
kind of sets the whole thing back for me.. maybe reword.. or think of a new line?
But what do I know ? :]
I like it.
kind of sets the whole thing back for me.. maybe reword.. or think of a new line?
But what do I know ? :]
I like it.
3rd Feb 2011 4:44pm
