Serenity

Sad, short and hugely effective. One hopes that you're well.

thank you jamie :)

yea i agree. nice work!

incision into any reader's heart.

Small, but perfectly performed.

S

incision? oh no! thank you both

this awakened a painful memory.I promised to write a poem for a dear person whom I lost tragically but I broke that promise.If I could be as honest in my writing as you are,I'd read my own work.I agree on the effectiveness this has

you're not obliged to write about your dear person's loss. write only if you feel like writing

heartfelt, sincere, sad and beautiful at the same time... thank you, dear for sharing this...

i should be thanking you for taking time and commented on my work! it's very much appreciated ^.^

The essence of writing is to provoke the mind to ponder and that you did.