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Sultry
The night was sultry
under a bruised moon
I waited alone
for you to deliver
me from the shades
of lust that enflamed
and enchanted
Like a dream
appearing from the shadows
your scent lingers in the air
preceding your predatory form
steely eyed and sleek
Taking me in your iron grip
crushing my form against yours
stealing a kiss from my pouting lips
I shiver at the coldness pouring
from your eyes
As you tear my clothes
from my body with practiced precision
drinking me in with a wicked smile
mesmerized by your stealth
I abandon my innocence
for one taste of seductive death
knowing I will die under your wrath
as you assault my body
First licking then biting
at my tender wet spot
beguiling demon
beating me into submission
Choking me with your seed
thrust down my throat
until i'm raw and gagging
on your engorged member
Taking me to your inner sanctum
one devised for torture
you chain me to the wall
my screams go unheard
as you lash and flail my skin
Exposed and open to you
you roughly enter me
thrusting in and out
tearing my pussy
then licking away the blood
My broken body
entered so brazenly
in every sense
taken from the wall
so tenderly then laid
upon your bed
Where you kiss away the death
of my innocence
as I shudder in orgasmic release
Mastered by the best
under a bruised moon
I waited alone
for you to deliver
me from the shades
of lust that enflamed
and enchanted
Like a dream
appearing from the shadows
your scent lingers in the air
preceding your predatory form
steely eyed and sleek
Taking me in your iron grip
crushing my form against yours
stealing a kiss from my pouting lips
I shiver at the coldness pouring
from your eyes
As you tear my clothes
from my body with practiced precision
drinking me in with a wicked smile
mesmerized by your stealth
I abandon my innocence
for one taste of seductive death
knowing I will die under your wrath
as you assault my body
First licking then biting
at my tender wet spot
beguiling demon
beating me into submission
Choking me with your seed
thrust down my throat
until i'm raw and gagging
on your engorged member
Taking me to your inner sanctum
one devised for torture
you chain me to the wall
my screams go unheard
as you lash and flail my skin
Exposed and open to you
you roughly enter me
thrusting in and out
tearing my pussy
then licking away the blood
My broken body
entered so brazenly
in every sense
taken from the wall
so tenderly then laid
upon your bed
Where you kiss away the death
of my innocence
as I shudder in orgasmic release
Mastered by the best
Published 3rd Dec 2013
| Edited 4th Dec 2013
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3rd Dec 2013 5:08pm
Wow, your *perspectives* have changed in amazing ways. The rape of innocence spoken in such desired terms.
Beautifully twisted ink. Delicious : )
Beautifully twisted ink. Delicious : )
3rd Dec 2013 5:29pm
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3rd Dec 2013 10:46pm
Unlike stealth this write ran straight at me, but as the predator, not as the prey. Enchanted your ink bounds me seductively, submissive in life a master in poetry.
3rd Dec 2013 10:48pm
3rd Dec 2013 6:05pm
"Bruised moon" there is something so sexual about it...I must say you my dear brenda are the queen of erotica.
"I abandon my innocence
for one taste of seductive death"
So Attractive...so honest...
As you Know I love all your work but this one is special.
"I abandon my innocence
for one taste of seductive death"
So Attractive...so honest...
As you Know I love all your work but this one is special.
3rd Dec 2013 10:49pm
thank you Cesar for the heartfelt comment causing me to smile.. you honor me :) much love Brenda
3rd Dec 2013 7:46pm
3rd Dec 2013 10:50pm
3rd Dec 2013 8:00pm
Mia hit it on he head, this wasn't sultry
It was more like White nova hott!! Damn I'm feeling very stiff
in my thoughts right now! lol ...whew doggy lol
It was more like White nova hott!! Damn I'm feeling very stiff
in my thoughts right now! lol ...whew doggy lol
3rd Dec 2013 10:52pm
Poe you're making me blush.. so wide is my smile glad you enjoyed :) much love Crim
3rd Dec 2013 8:22pm
Sensual, sexy, erotic, seductive, provocative, alluring, airless, steamy, etc....
...umm yeah, this is the epitome of 'Sultry'...
Love this sweet Crim. Xo
Pen hug~
...umm yeah, this is the epitome of 'Sultry'...
Love this sweet Crim. Xo
Pen hug~
3rd Dec 2013 10:54pm
thank you sweet Rain for such a beautiful comment and pen hugs :) much love Crim
3rd Dec 2013 8:23pm
Sent chills down every inch of my body. So deliciously wicked :) a phenomenal read <3
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4th Dec 2013 3:02am
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5th Dec 2013 5:09am
You're raw as it gets, & I have a deep admiration for that. I have to be careful when I read your erotic pieces...I always approach them with trepidation, wondering if I'll have a hard-on by the end, & I always do. & it's cold out! Great stuff, Crim.
5th Dec 2013 9:19am
thank you Butcher the best compliment an erotic writer can have.. much love Crim :)
6th Dec 2013 10:48am
your pain threshold is a good distance from your tormented flesh, Crim, & kisses are the balm upon the wounds...
6th Dec 2013 10:21pm
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7th Dec 2013 6:28pm
will read later
as i like short and sweet
that much stands it
quicker
'''''''''you roughly enter me
thrusting in and out
tearing my pussy
then licking away....'''
YOU BLOCKED ME AGAIN
and again won't then enter
ur poetricks domain
be sane
as i like short and sweet
that much stands it
quicker
'''''''''you roughly enter me
thrusting in and out
tearing my pussy
then licking away....'''
YOU BLOCKED ME AGAIN
and again won't then enter
ur poetricks domain
be sane
6th Mar 2014 4:38pm
Anonymous
5th Mar 2014 2:41am
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6th Mar 2014 4:38pm
