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Sweet Dragon
Methadone dreams
heroin nightmares
needing a fix
now more than ever
my heart bruised
hurting I long
to fill the rig
inject it in my neck
and blast off
to dream land
mix my methadone
with heroin
really fucking get off
tar burning in the spoon
vinegar in the air
make love with the dragon
get lost in the maze
of running the streets
home at last
yes i'm an ex junkie whore
that doesn't mean
I don't feel
my heart constricts
at rejection
i'm not so poetically inclined
just raw truth and pain
today I don't want
one whiskey, one bourbon, one beer
I want my methadone blanket
the heroin jacket
barbed wire heart not affected
by life such as it is
i'm slipping sideways
benzos mixed with whiskey
not healing this broken
macabre spectacle
of a person
i'm in a cage of self hate
teetering on the edge
of madness
veins burning
for a final kiss of death
longing to plummet
into the darkness
erase the taint
that hugs my soul tight
heroin nightmares
needing a fix
now more than ever
my heart bruised
hurting I long
to fill the rig
inject it in my neck
and blast off
to dream land
mix my methadone
with heroin
really fucking get off
tar burning in the spoon
vinegar in the air
make love with the dragon
get lost in the maze
of running the streets
home at last
yes i'm an ex junkie whore
that doesn't mean
I don't feel
my heart constricts
at rejection
i'm not so poetically inclined
just raw truth and pain
today I don't want
one whiskey, one bourbon, one beer
I want my methadone blanket
the heroin jacket
barbed wire heart not affected
by life such as it is
i'm slipping sideways
benzos mixed with whiskey
not healing this broken
macabre spectacle
of a person
i'm in a cage of self hate
teetering on the edge
of madness
veins burning
for a final kiss of death
longing to plummet
into the darkness
erase the taint
that hugs my soul tight
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Re: Sweet Dragon
Anonymous
25th Nov 2013 00:56am
I want to hug your soul tight.

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re: Re: Sweet Dragon
25th Nov 2013 1:04am
thank you beautiful Petit you are hugging my soul tight I feel it.. much love Brenda
Re: Sweet Dragon
25th Nov 2013 1:32am
so sorry that you're enduring these feelings.
I hope that soon your beautiful words will be expressing something more at peace.
I hope that soon your beautiful words will be expressing something more at peace.
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25th Nov 2013 1:58am
Re: Sweet Dragon
25th Nov 2013 1:32am
You are so beautiful
When I stare at your picture
I wonder
How did she get there ?
Is this truth or fiction ?
Or a mixture of both ?
You are the true Mistress on this site
Despite what you write
You have all the power
As well as you should ....
When I stare at your picture
I wonder
How did she get there ?
Is this truth or fiction ?
Or a mixture of both ?
You are the true Mistress on this site
Despite what you write
You have all the power
As well as you should ....
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re: Re: Sweet Dragon
25th Nov 2013 1:59am
thank you Poet i'm a mixture of both.. thank you for the heartfelt comment :) much love Crim
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25th Nov 2013 1:35am
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Re: Sweet Dragon
25th Nov 2013 2:19am
Dark, painful expression you have unleashed in this write. Hate that your going through such pain, but on the bright side, it does make for some amazing poetry. Stay strong, Crim.
Much love and respect,
Sir
Much love and respect,
Sir
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25th Nov 2013 2:32am
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25th Nov 2013 2:45am
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25th Nov 2013 10:33am
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Anonymous
25th Nov 2013 2:46am
awww Crim-iny my dear friend let me hold you in my heart till you rise above this..I want to be here for you hugzzzz

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25th Nov 2013 10:34am
Re: Sweet Dragon
25th Nov 2013 5:22am
Dark dark dark... Makes my heart ache for your pain
sweetness, you however expressed ur pain exceptionally well.
sweetness, you however expressed ur pain exceptionally well.
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25th Nov 2013 10:34am
Re: Sweet Dragon
25th Nov 2013 6:01am
I want my methadone blanket
the heroin jacket barbed wire
heart not affected
by life such as it is
you express this darkness so beautifully Brenda, one cannot help but feel your pain with you.
the heroin jacket barbed wire
heart not affected
by life such as it is
you express this darkness so beautifully Brenda, one cannot help but feel your pain with you.
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re: Re: Sweet Dragon
25th Nov 2013 10:35am
thank you beautiful Mia you always know how to make me smile :) much love Brenda
Re: Sweet Dragon
25th Nov 2013 6:08am
Brenda this is quite sad and heart wrenching, i feel your struggle and pain..you've penned it with such raw emotions.
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25th Nov 2013 10:36am
Re: Sweet Dragon
25th Nov 2013 6:16am
' i'm not so poetically inclined
just raw truth and pain'
stay that way forever , that's what makes u a beautiful artist...
write on fellow poet /writer
cyanide..
just raw truth and pain'
stay that way forever , that's what makes u a beautiful artist...
write on fellow poet /writer
cyanide..
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25th Nov 2013 10:37am
Re: Sweet Dragon
25th Nov 2013 7:19am
There's a way out, I promise. Here's some more hugs to remind you of that.
Great work on the poem, but pain is not the only muse...
Great work on the poem, but pain is not the only muse...
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re: Re: Sweet Dragon
25th Nov 2013 10:38am
thank you for the insightful comment Atakti I know you're right.. just feeling low when I wrote this thank you for the hugs.. much love Crim :)
Re: Sweet Dragon
25th Nov 2013 2:43pm
This is my 3rd time back, dang, um, I usually avoid drug poems, sigh. Being touched by death in such manner. anyway, I feel your weakness, but desensitized for remorse. Perfect execution in painting the picture, however. Inked intravenously well, peace to you, missy :)~
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25th Nov 2013 4:07pm
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27th Nov 2013 4:12pm
Re: Sweet Dragon
27th Nov 2013 10:58am
powerful write! must be hard to go though so i truly hope you can find happiness in life and be free of drugs and everything that goes with them! :)
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re: Re: Sweet Dragon
27th Nov 2013 4:13pm
i'm drug free at the moment but the temptation is always there thank you for the add and thoughtful comment :) peace Crim
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28th Nov 2013 7:40am
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