Thirsty

Criim,

Asked for perfecly...how dare such a request go unanswered!
Loved your line:
"you're the pyro that sets me ablaze"
HOT!!!

tornado

thank you Tornado you always make me smile :) much love Crim

sweet write. poetry can be dangerously addictive...

Addictive it is and powerful.. thank you John.. peace Crim :)

powerful longing from first to last. great work!

thank you lovely lady :) much love Brenda

Powerful penning even if running on reminisces of greatness. The after effects are deep felt. Peace*

thank you Angel for such a great comment :) peace Crim

...nothing like being parched for flaming love.
...so beautiful Crim...Xo

thank you beautiful Rain.. much love Crim :)

How my heart felt this thru and thru. I relate to this completely. I know what it is like to luv and yet so many times be not noticed as if nothing. All it would take is a simple "hello" and smile is brought back. Enjoyed this tender write. :)

thank you for your tender words beautiful Flower.. much love Crim :)

thank you Gabriel you are always like a lovely breeze with your comments.. peace Crim :)

"longing for tomorrow's kiss  
missing you lost in today  
one fix from you would do"

ouch! how deeply appropriate to so many different 'fixes'
you're an inspired scribe sweet Crim-iny :) <3  

thank you kind Tom making me smile :) much love Crim

" my fire put out
like a half smoked cigarette
put out on my flesh "

Favorite lines. Smoking hot!

thank you Sir I always enjoy your visits smiling wide :) much love Crim p.s. I had to edit that stanza a bit realizing I said put out twice in the same stanza I hope it you still like it sincerely Crim :)

It happens to the best of us, I have found some of my work to be full of typos when I go to re-read it later.lol. But editing or no, your honest, heartfelt expression in your work never ceases to amaze me.

Best Regards,
Sir

what a well written poem
talent, talent, talent
write on!
Peace xo
Kitty

thank you Kitty making me smile wide :) peace Brenda

A depth of sadness is felt all throughout this ink... Makes the heart feel weighted. Excellent n expressive til the very last word

thank you for the love Poe.. much love Crim :)

S2 and S7 are the ones that really set it a cut above for me.  Really enjoyed the read, it took me on a journey.

thank you Dystopian for the great comment :) peace Crim

thank you Mr. A I always enjoy you visits :) much love Crim

So well written and relatable by so many, I'm sure.

thank you Petit for the lovely comment :) much love Crim

it's never just one fix though, is it...
Such heartbreaking words Brenda, I wish you peace xo

No Mia one fix is never enough.. thank you for the visit and the peace your presence brings :) much love Brenda

my favorite line
' for your venom filled verse
chained to yesterday
I write of aborted love'

I usually write late night after work , alone in my room with just a red bulb on .. the kinda darkness that I look to write kicks in completely in this line .. like the three lined stanzas that u have built.. noticed that in your last two writes as well ..

write on ...

cyanide.

thank you Cyanide glad you enjoyed the darkness of this one.. peace Crim :)

A Write of yearning skillfully conveyed-Beautiful Darkness Dear Crim!!!

thank you dear Soul for the lovely comment.. much love Crim :)

beauty at its finest.

thank you lovely Opheliac :) much love Crim

These are the poems that make the phoenix fly...tell the stories we ourselves cannot compose..great work..loved it

thank you lovely lady for the beautiful comment :) much love Crim

Great write sweets!!!
Love your pen!!


Sir Lancelott

thank you Lance :) peace Crim